题目内容
15.假如你是王华,最近你在浏览一个美国中学网站时,看到一位名叫Stephen的中学 学生的留言,他计划在暑假期间到中国的一些文化特色鲜明的地方去旅游,希望能有.一名中国学生做他的导游.你对此很感兴趣,请根据以下要点提示写一封e-mail给 他,介绍你的相关情况.词数120词左右,可适当发挥.1.如何得知他的愿望;
2.希望做他的导游;
3.打算如何给他做导游;
4.期盼他的回复.
Dear Stephen,
Recently,while browsing a senior high school website of the USA.I saw the message you posted on it.I know you have planned to travel to China and need a student to serve as your guide.I am writing to apply for the job.
I'll show you around many places of interest introducing a large number of old buildings,traditional customs,special cultural activities to you.You will have a deeper impression of these places.And I'll also invite you to play and talk with the local people to learn more about their life.I think I can help you with your communication well.
All in all,I hope you will believe in me and my excellent ability of guiding.Looking forward to your immediate reply.
Yours
Wang Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达是一篇实用文,要求写一封电子邮件,给出的要点较多,只要稍加发挥想象即可.写作时需注意以下方面:1)在信的开头一般要说明写电子邮件的目的,本文的写作目的是"希望作他的导游".2)在写第二部分,即正文时要注意三个要点的表述要详略得当,应该用适当的过渡词来起到承接作用,以使内容连贯,具有层次感.3)尽量使用多种句式结构来丰富文章语言,比如并列句、复合句和短语等,做到长短句结合.4)因为是讲述自己的计划打算,所以要使用一般将来时.5)要注意字数和标点符号等.
重点短语和句型:
show around 带领某人参观
places of intersect 名胜
traditional customs 传统风俗
while browsing a senior high school website of the USA.I saw the message you posted on it.
while引导时间状语从句,从句省略了相同的主语和系动词.
I'll show you around many places of interest introducing a large number of old buildings,traditional customs,special cultural activities to you.
句中现在分词introducing做伴随状语.
I hope you will believe in me and my excellent ability of guiding.
句中hope后接宾语从句.
解答 Dear Stephen,
Recently,while browsing a senior high school website of the USA.I saw the message you posted on it.(重点句型一)I know you have planned to travel to China and need a student to serve as your guide.I am writing to apply for the job.(表明目的)
I'll show you around many places of interest introducing a large number of old buildings,traditional customs,special cultural activities to you.(重点句型二)You will have a deeper impression of these places.And I'll also invite you to play and talk with the local people to learn more about their life.I think I can help you with your communication well.(介绍情况)
All in all,I hope you will believe in me and my excellent ability of guiding.(重点句型三) Looking forward to your immediate reply.(表达期望)
Yours
Wang Hua
点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力.写作时要注意:要点的提炼要全;关键短语和句型要写对;过渡词和过渡短语要自然,通顺地道;最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确.
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