题目内容
【题目】假设你叫李华,是一所外语特色高中的学生会主席。最近,你校部分同学要去澳大利亚参加为期两周的国际交流活动。请你用英语为该活动专栏写一则通知,告知同学们一些注意事项。内容包括:
1. 保存好护照(passport)和钱包;
2. 不要独自外出活动;
3. 带换洗衣服和常用药品;
4. 注意文明礼貌,维护祖国的形象。
注意:1. 词数120左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear friends,
I’d like to offer some tips to those students who will go abroad so that you can avoid trouble and make your trip pleasant.
First of all, you should take good care of your passports and wallets, without which you could do nothing in a strange land. Secondly, you should never go out alone to avoid getting lost. Thirdly, it is necessary to take some clothes and medicine in case the weather changes and you might fall ill. In addition, you should mind your behavior wherever you go and whatever you do because you represent the Chinese people. You should behave properly and establish a good image.
If you follow my advice, I am sure you will enjoy your trip.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于通知类文章,根据提示信息写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,比如用了First of all,Secondly,Thirdly,In addition表示顺序的词,使文章条理清楚。还有一些句式比如文章开头I’d like to offer some tips to those students who will go abroad so that you can avoid trouble and make your trip pleasant.这句话用了I’d like to的句型,定语从句和so that句型……。此外,文章还使用了大量短语,比如take good care of,avoid dong sth.,in case等。