Question

17．你们学校正在进行英语演讲比赛，题目为"If I were…"．请你以此为题写一篇英语演讲稿，参加这次比赛．
内容：
1．选择你喜欢的（一种职业、一个人物）；
2．说明你的选择理由．
注意：
词数：100-120，文章开头与结尾已给出（不计入总词数）；
Good morning，everyone，                                                           
Thanks for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息以"If I were…"为题写一篇英语演讲稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：选择你喜欢的（一种职业、一个人物）；说明你的选择理由．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：The reason why I choose to be a dustman is that I want to make our city a more beautiful place to live．（高分句型一）句中使用了The reason why…is that…句式，其中why引导的是定语从句，that引导的是表语从句
I would tell others that we dustmen can also make a great difference to our society by performing our jobs well．（高分句型二）句中that引导的是宾语从句，作tell的宾语
  No matter what you do，it is important that you do it well and it is worth doing as long as you consider it valuable．（高分句型三）句中no matter what属于让步状语从句，that为主语从句，as long as 引导的是条件状语从句

解答 Good morning，everyone，
     I'm glad to stand here to give a speech．My topic today is"If I were a dustman"．
     Perhaps you are surprised at my choice，but I do think being a dustman is a great choice．The reason why I choose to be a dustman is that I want to make our city a more beautiful place to live．（高分句型一）If I were a dustman，I would make our city cleaner with no rubbish lying on the street．I would tell others that we dustmen can also make a great difference to our society by performing our jobs well．（高分句型二）
     No matter what you do，it is important that you do it well and it is worth doing as long as you consider it valuable．（高分句型三）
     Thanks for your listening．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．