[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Of all the things that make me happy, music is that I like best. Music has a strong effect on me in different way. Sometimes it helps me feel in relief even when things go wrongly. Sometimes it makes me to burst into tears in an instant but I still want to enjoy it again. More importantly, music is just like a devoting friend who cares about me all the time. With this friend encouraged me now and then, I have learned to be confident of me and smile at the world. Honestly speaking, music plays so an important part in my life that nothing can take place of it. What a wonder that human begins had ever created!

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【解析】１.ｂｅ　动词后面是表语从句，引导词在表语从句中既起引导作用也做表语从句里的宾语，其双重作用，故把ｔｈａｔ―――ｗｈａｔ。

２.根据前面的ｄｉｆｆｅｒｅｎｔ可知此处用名词复数，故把ｗａｙ―――ｗａｙｓ。

３.固定词组：go wrong出毛病，发生故障。根据句意可知把wrongly---wrong.

4.固定搭配：make sb. do sth.根据句意可知把make me to burst into中的to去掉。

5.句意：音乐就像一位一直照顾你的忠诚的朋友。根据句意可知把devoting---devoted。

6.考查with的独立主格结构，with+宾语+doing sth.，此处表示主动，故把encouraged--- encouraging。

7.句意：我已经学会对自己要自信，对世界微笑。根据句意可知把me---myself。

8.part是名词，所以用such修饰，故把so---such。

9.句意：音乐在我的生活中扮演着如此重要作用，没有什么能替代它。take the place of顶替，代替，故在take place中间加the。

10.句意：这是人类创造的奇迹。根据句意可知用现在完成时态，故把had---have。

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