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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The person who touched me most is an unknown lady. I study in a city school but lives in a village 15 kilometers away. One afternoon, I receive a call from my family saying my mom was serious ill. I hurried to the bus station, only find the last bus had left. Feel anxious, I decided to walk home. On the way a car stopped and the driver asked me that I needed help. Worried about being cheated, I said anything. But she was such sincere that I finally accepted her offer. When we reached my village, it was dark. Seeing her car out of the sight. I was in tear. Whenever I think of her, I always feel grateful.

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【解析】1.与study有共同的主语I，故把lives改为live。

2.根据One afternoon可知，讲述发生在过去的事情，故句子要用一般过去时态，故把receive改为received。

3.副词修饰形容词，故把serious改为seriously。

4.句意：我急忙到了公交车站，却发现最后一班公交车已经离开。此处用动词不定式表示未预料到的结果，故在only后加to。

5.根据与逻辑主语I是主动关系，故此处应用现在分词，故把Feel改为Feeling。注意大写开头。

6.句意：司机问我是否需要帮助。故把that改为if/whether。

7.句意：担心被欺骗，我什么都没说。故把anything改为nothing。

8. sincere是形容词，要用so修饰，such修饰名词，故把such改为so。

9.固定词组：out of sight“看不见”，故把sight前面的the去掉。

10.固定词组：in tears“流着泪”。故把tear改为tears。