题目内容
假定你是我校的高三学生李华, 学校将要为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动, 特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿。词数120左右;发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
1.学会学习:方法、习惯等;
2. 学会做人:真诚、友善等;
3. 其他方面:考生自拟。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinion on what to learn in senior high school.
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Thank you!
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be changing. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains, no gains, I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.
【解析】这是一篇说明式演讲发言稿,围绕自身的学习做人等方面的经验和方法娓娓道来。考生在写作时要注意思路清晰及条理清楚。题目已给定大致的观点,要注意汉译英的正确性以及不要遗漏观点,特别注意不要逐条翻译。本文开篇就用了一个in the coming years,“coming,personally ”两个词很地道,体现了考生的英文素养。文章第二句Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. 我们应该高效学习,,副词efficiently的使用使表达简洁明了。 第三句try effective methods to achieve my academic goals,动宾短语搭配准确。第四句 Developing a good habit is also of importance。动名词做主语,充分展示了较强的语言表达能力。be of importance,摆脱了常用的be important,提升了写作档次。第五句It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.benefit sb,使某人收益;get involved in ,积极参加;高档词汇和词组增加了文章亮点。第三段第一句take part in 参加的另一个表达,丰富了表达形式。第二句They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.be helpful与上文benefit相互呼应,build up my body ,enrich my life,属于亮点。最后一段,引用了名言,no pains ,no gains.点缀了文章,I am sure that,为固定表达结构,colorful ,fruitful,用得精妙。通篇以firstly,in addition,finally的结构,层次清晰明了。此文章最大的亮点在于词汇和短语的妙用。总结:基本格式为fistly...in addition....finally.
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