Question

【题目】写作二（满分20分）

假如你是高中三年级的学生李华，你在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。

请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如下图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的看法。

注意：1．信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计人总词数

2．词数为80左右。

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---"To whom do you go when in trouble?" The results are as follows.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior Three student. Recently we have carried out a survey---“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The results are as follows.

61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience. Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others’ business. They find it hard to get along with others.

It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example. However, some general comments can be made. It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇给调查报告的作文，也是提纲类作文，主要内容已经给出，就是让我们有烦恼都向谁来诉说。给材料作文的写作首先要做到的就是不遗漏要点，如是反映要点内容。范文中提到一些很不错的短语have a better understanding of对。。有更好的理解； play a more important role in在。。起重要作用；61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other.在这个句子the reason of which引导定语从句；It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a survey example.这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；