Question

19．假定你是李华，因陪母亲看病，不能参加明天下午关于美国文化的讲座．请写一封短信向老师Miss Clinton请假．
内容主要包括：
1．不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；
2．向老师陈述缺席理由；
3．询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Miss Clinton，
I am very sorry thatI will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is onAmerican culture．
My mother isill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a businesstrip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask forseveral days'leave．
I am veryinterested in the topic of American culture．It is nearly a pity that I missit．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．If so，I can listento it when it is convenient．
Thank you verymuch．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是书信类作文，根据所提供的材料，写一封电子邮件向老师Miss Clinton 请假，也属提纲作文．写作要点包括：不能听讲座，跟老师表示歉意；向老师陈述缺席理由；询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：be able to do sth  （在校门口），attend the lecture （前往某处），on a business trip（出差旅行），be very interested in…（很感兴趣…），ask for several days'leave（请几天假），when it is convenient（当方便的时候）．

解答 Dear Miss Clinton，
I am very sorrythat I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is onAmerican culture．【高分句型】（因不听讲座，跟老师表示歉意）
My mother isill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a businesstrip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask forseveral days'leave．【高分句型】（向老师陈述缺席的理由）
I am veryinterested in the topic of American culture．It is nearly a pity that I missit．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．If so，I can listento it when it is convenient．（询问老师是否有讲座录音或影像，以便日后补听讲座）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．