Question

4．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values．
During winter，the sky is still dark at 6：30a．m．when the first-year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165-acre campus and it can take up to an hour．
Mr．Sun，the university official，said labor is good for building character and promotes"the spirit of hard work．"Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus．They never litter because they've been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others．
Some students，however，are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction．Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms．
写作内容
1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）支持或反对这个学校的做法；
（2）用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点．
写作要求
1．可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据；
2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4．不必写标题．
评分标准
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
OneuniversityinZhengzhoudesignsaprogramwherestudentsmustcleanthecampuseverydayandrelatesittoclasscredits．Somepeoplesupporttheprogramwhileothersdonot．
Generally，I am in favor of the practice．To begin with，through their effort，studentsprovide a clean and comfortable environment，which，as a result，is anassurance of their successful academic life．Moreover，learning and labor cannot only serve to build students'character but also contribute positively tostudents developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits．Last but notleast，by enjoying the fruits of other's labor，students will develop theawareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor．
In short，carrying out the cleaning program is crucial．Thesignificance for students of participating in it means more than academicsuccess．It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as thecampus．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：relates A to B （A事物与B事物有关），be in favor of sth （支持某事…），as a result （所以），serve to do…（用来做…），contribute to…（有利于，促成…），develop the awareness of …（培养…的意识），carry out  （实施），participate in…（参加）．

解答 One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits．Some people support the program while others do not．（概括）
  Generally，I am in favor of the practice．To begin with，through their effort，studentsprovide a clean and comfortable environment，which，as a result，is anassurance of their successful academic life．【高分句型】Moreover，learning and labor can not onlyserve to build students'character but also contribute positively to studentsdeveloping healthy routines and good sanitation habits．Last but not least，byenjoying the fruits of other's labor，students will develop the awareness ofgratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor．（支持学校的做法及阐述理由）
In short，carrying out the cleaning program is crucial．【高分句型】The significance forstudents of participating in it means more than academic success．It is part ofmoral education and benefits students as well as the campus．（自己的观点）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．