假设你是李华.是一名高三学生.你的同班同学王强因患白血病而住院.目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄.现在需要骨髓移植(bone marrow transplant), 需要20万元.请你帮他写一封求助信.要点如下: 对病人的简单介绍, 目前的困难, 希望得到捐助, 联系电话:白天5221600, 晚上5221610 注意:1.词数100左右.开头和结尾已给出.不计入总词� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病（leukemia）而住院，目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植（bone marrow transplant）, 需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：

对病人的简单介绍；

目前的困难；

希望得到捐助；

联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610

注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends,

I’m very sad to tell that

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Yours truly，

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear friends,

I’m very sad to tell you that my classmates Wang Qiang, a senior high student, suddenly fell faint when he was preparing the coming college entrance examination. He is suffering from a serious disease “Leukemia”.He has been in hospital for about three months and spent all the money his parents saved.

Wang Qiang is a top student in our class,but he is in hospital now. He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transport. However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200000 yuan. How can a poor family afford such high expenses. But time is life, we can’t wait to see such a sunshine boy lose his life.

So your help is badly needed, Let’s do whatever we do to save our fellow student. The life of a lovely boy is in your hand. Your love can save a life. You can contact 5221600 in the daytime and 5221610 at night.

Yours truly,

Lihua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文：题目已经交代的具体情况，也给了适当的要点，因此考生首先要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，适当增加细节，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等

【亮点说明】He is in urgent need of a bone marrow transport. 这句话用了词组in urgent need of “急需“However, his family is too poor to afford the expenses, which total 200000 yuan.这句话有非限制性定语从句和和too…to…结构。Let’s do whatever we do to save our fellow student这句话用whatever引导的名词性从句，这些都使得这篇范文读起来顺畅

考点：考查提纲类书面表达