Question

6．作为一名高中学生，你将参加主题为"let's ride bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等．
参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）；有毒排放（poisonous emission）；交通堵塞（traffic congestion）
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Good morning，everyone，
I'm a senior middle school student．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transportation，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
How can we solve the problem then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．What's more，riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
Therefore，let's take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles．（高分句型）Come on and join us．
That's all!Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．作为一名高中学生，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等．需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．一定要给出自己的看法．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色．注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少．
【亮点说明】As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．含有一个原因状语从句．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transportation，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）
As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）
What's more，riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
 Therefore，let's take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles．（高分句型）

解答 Good morning，everyone，
       I'm a senior middle school student．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
       As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transportation，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
       How can we solve the problem then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．What's more，riding bicycles is a good way to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
       Therefore，let's take the responsibility to built up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles．（高分句型）Come on and join us．
       That's all!Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．