题目内容
随着手机的普及化,越来越多的学生将手机带入校园。你作为校刊记者对一些师生就学生随身携带手机的现象进行了采访。请根据下面所提供的信息用英语给你校校刊写一篇报道,客观介绍人们的看法,并表述自己的观点。要点如下:
支持者的看法 | 反对者的看法 | 你的看法 |
方便与家人朋友联系; 可以放松一下自己; 一些手机应用对学习有帮助; | 使学生分心,成绩下降; 影响睡眠; | ? |
注意:1. 内容应包括以上要点,可以适当增加细节,以使内容连贯;
2. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:手机应用 APP 使分心 distract
It’s common nowadays in some schools that students take mobile phones with them. And people have distinctly different ideas on this issue.
It’s common nowadays in some schools that students take mobile phones with them. And people have distinctly different ideas on this issue.
Some people approve of it. First of all, it’s convenient for students to keep in touch with families and friends by using mobile phones. It can also relieve students of stress from time to time. Besides, some APPs can help students with their study, such as Youdao Dictionary and music players for listening practice.
However, others object to it because it’s a great distraction for students, which may cause a drop in grades. And addicted to mobile phones, some students may spend much of their sleep time playing with mobile phones.
In my opinion, students should be allowed to use mobile phones as long as they keep in mind that study is their major task.
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求根据所给信息用英语给校刊写一篇报道,客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法,并表达自己的观点。写作要点包括:支持者的看法;反对者的看法;自己的观点三部分。词数在100词左右,注意开头不计入总词数;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文包括了所有要点,进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了定语从句、原因状语从句、非谓语动词、宾语从句等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:范文使用了固定句型it’s convenient for students to keep in touch with families and friends;原因状语从句because it’s a great distraction for students;定语从句which may cause a drop in grades;非谓语动词And addicted to mobile phones;条件句as long as they keep in mind that...;宾语从句that study is their major task等语法知识,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
短语和搭配方面:approve of, relieve...of..., from time to time, help with, such as, object to, spend much time doing, play with, be allowed to do, as long as, keep ...in mind等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用first of all, besides, however, in my opinion等来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得很有条理。
考点:材料作文