Question

10．假定你是李华，一名高中生，正在一家汉语培训机构兼职教外国小朋友汉语，在上课之前请对自己和汉语进行简要的介绍．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．开头已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Hello，everyone．Nice to see you here．I'm Li Hua，a Grade one student in a high school．I feel honored to be your Chinese teacher．First，I'd like to briefly introduce something about Chinese to you．
Chinese is the official language of China，which is one of the world's major languages．In total，there are over a billion people speaking Chinese，most of whom are Chinese．Chinese characters look beautiful and are rich in meanings．With the development of China，people around the world are more interested in China and Chinese culture．So Chinese is becoming more and more popular，and is being learned by more and more overseas friends．If you want to learn it well，you should study hard and try to communicate with our local Chinese as much as possible．
Now let's begin our class．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
With the development of China，people around the world are more interested in China and Chinese culture．So Chinese is becoming more and more popular，and is being learned by more and more overseas friends
随着中国的发展，全世界的人都在中国和中国文化更感兴趣．所以，中国正变得越来越流行，并被越来越多的海外朋友学习．
高分句型二：
If you want to learn it well，you should study hard and try to communicate with our local Chinese as much as possible．
如果你想学好英语，你应该努力尝试与我们当地的中文交流尽可能．

解答 Hello，everyone．Nice to see you here．I'm Li Hua，a Grade one student in a high school．I feel honored to be your Chinese teacher．First，I'd like to briefly introduce something about Chinese to you．
  Chinese is the official language of China，which is one of the world's major languages．In total，there are over a billion people speaking Chinese，most of whom are Chinese．Chinese characters look beautiful and are rich in meanings．With the development of China，people around the world are more interested in China and Chinese culture．So Chinese is becoming more and more popular，and is being learned by more and more overseas friends（高分句型一）．If you want to learn it well，you should study hard and try to communicate with our local Chinese as much as possible（高分句型二）．
    Now let's begin our class．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．