题目内容

7.李越是家中的独生女,为此,生活的一切都由其父母包办.但是,自高中住校以来,她却因无法适应独立生活而感到十分苦恼,学习也因此受到影响.请根据这一普遍现象,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文.
你的文章应包括下列要点.
1.描述李越的情况;
2.分析这种现象对孩子人生发展的影响(例举两点)
3.你对父母的合理建议(至少两点)
注意:
1.文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数).
2.词数:100-120.

分析 这是一篇论述独生子女独立生活能力差的作文.根据题目要求可知用第三人称和一般现在时态.内容主要有:一描述李越的情况;二分析这种现象对孩子人生发展的影响;三对父母的合理建议.
高分句型:
1.So she has been at a loss,wondering what to do with the new life,which has consequently influenced her study.句子里at a loss 表示"茫然,不知所措"; which 引导非限制性定语从句,代指她不知怎么办这件事;consequently表示"结果".
因此,她不知所措,不知道怎样处理新的生活,这件事结果影响到她的学习.
2.Obviously,children like Li Yue are lacking in the ability to overcome difficulties in life and thus unable to face challenges in a society of competition 句子里are lacking in 表示"缺乏";thus 表示"因此".
很明显,像李月这样的孩子缺乏克服生活困难的问题,因此不能够面对社会生活中的挑战.

解答 How should parents help children to be independent?
Li Yue is the only child in her family.Her parents have done everything concerned with  her in daily life.However,after attending high school,she has to live in the dorm.So she has been at a loss,wondering what to do with the new life,which has consequently influenced her study.【高分句型一】(描述李越的情况)
   Nowadays,there is a growing concern over the phenomenon.Obviously,children like Li Yue are lacking in the ability to overcome difficulties in life and thus unable to face challenges in a society of competition.【高分句型二】(分析这种现象对孩子人生发展的影响)
    Therefore,more efforts should be made by parents to help us be independent.To begin  with,parents should provide opportunities for us to deal with our personal affairs.Moreover,they can allow us to participate in school activities.With parents'trust,we will gradually learn to be independent.(对父母的合理建议)

点评 考查提纲类作文.
本文用了许多高中的词汇,所以使得文章的水平显得比较高.所以建议学生在平时写作时练习用高级词汇,这样在高考时就可以提高作文的等级,这也是评分的一个方面.

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