题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is often the case, when people are attending meeting, having meals or waiting buses, you can always find them addicted to their phones, complete ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. But, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involved in phones fail to communicate good with those around them.
As far as I am concerning, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile, care most about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.
【答案】
As is often the case, when people are attending meeting, having meals or waiting ∧ buses, you
meetings for
can always find them addicted to their phones, complete ignoring others.
completely
This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can
that
be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.
keep
But, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people
However is
involved in phones fail to communicate good with those around them.
well
As far as I am concerning, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work
concerned
and study. Meanwhile, care most about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.
more
【1】第一句meeting→meetings，考查名词。可数名词单数不可单独使用，另外根据与后面形式一致故将meeting改为meetings。
【2】第一句waiting和buses之间加for
【3】第一句complete→completely
【4】第三句why→-that
【5】第三句kept→keep
【6】第四句But →However
【7】第四句are ---is
【8】第五句good→well
【9】第六句concerning→concerned
【10】第七句most →more
【解析】
【1】第一句meeting→meetings，考查名词。可数名词单数不可单独使用，另外根据与后面形式一致故将meeting改为meetings。
【2】第一句waiting和buses之间加for，考查动词。wait是不及物动词，故在后面加for。
【3】第一句complete→completely， 考查副词。ignoring为动词，修饰动词应用副词，故complete改为completely。
【4】第三句why→-that， 考查引导词。这是因为智能手机可以被用来玩游戏等，本题考查固定句型：the reason is that…原因是。故why改为that。
【5】第三句kept→keep 考查动词。此处为and连接两个并列的动词不定时。故kept改为keep。
【6】第四句But →However考查连词。but后面接句子不用逗号隔开，however用逗号隔开，故But改为However。
【7】第四句are ---is考查be动词。 too much exposure to phones做主语谓语动词应用单数。故are改为is。
【8】第五句good→well考查副词。修饰动词应用副词。故good改为well 。
【9】第六句concerning→concerned考查固定短语。As far as I am concerned意思为：就我而言，故concerning改为concerned。
【10】第七句most →more，考查比较级。与此同时，多多关注他们的家人和朋友，而不是手机。故most改为more。
