题目内容
7.假如你是李华,你在美国的笔友 Henry 在互联网上偶然读到了有关2014 年开封菊花花会的帖子,对此很感兴趣.他来信询问有关菊花花会的相关情况.请你根据下表提示的内容给 Henry 回一封信.| 始创于 | 1983年 |
| 会期 | 每年10月18日-11月18日 |
| 展区 | 龙亭公园为主会场,其它各个公园均有展区 |
| 活动内容 | 赏菊;观看精彩节目(历史短剧,服装秀等),品尝开封小吃 |
1.词数100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
4.参考词汇:菊花花会-Chrysanthemum Festival.
Dear Henry.Dear Henry,
I'm very happy to learn that you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum.Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival.
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,enjoying a history of over 30 years.From then on,it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year.During the festival,a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed in Longting Park as well as in other parks.There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there.Besides,there are wonderful performances in the parks,such as historical short plays,and costume shows.Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice.
I am looking forward to your visit next year..
分析 本文采用了"表格+提纲类"形式,根据文章所给提示信息写一篇短文,询问有关2014年开封菊花花会的情况.写作要点:1.花会始创时间;2.会期;3.展区;4.活动内容. 既是提纲作文又是图表类作文.
写作时时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主.人称以第三人称为主.
重要短语:be interested in(感兴趣),enjoy a history of (享受…的历史),a variety of (很多,各种各样的),as well as (和,又,也),admire sth (欣赏…),such as (例如),enjoy delicious local snacks(享受当地的美味小吃),look forward to…(期望做某事).
【高分句型】
1.The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,enjoying a history of over 30 years.
这里是现在分词enjoying作伴随状语,主句为The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,主句的主语the first Chrysanthemum Festival 与所给动词enjoy存在逻辑上的主动关系.
2.There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there.
这里是固定句型"There is no doubt that …",意为"毫无疑问…".此句为同位语从句.
3.Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice.
这里是动名词作主语,主语为Enjoying delicious local snacks,谓语动词为is,is之后是表语.
解答 Dear Henry,
I'm very happy to learnthat you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum.Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival.(开头-引出话题)
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983,enjoying ahistory of over 30 years.【高分句型】(始创于)
From then on,it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year.(会期) During the festival,a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed inLongting Park as well as in other parks.(展区)
There is no doubt that visitors canadmire beautiful chrysanthemums there.【高分句型】Besides,there arewonderful performances in the parks,such ashistorical short plays,and costume shows.Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice.【高分句型】(活动内容)
I am looking forward to your visit next year.
点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来,并认真看图,围绕主题,提炼要点,发挥想象,语言力求准确、简洁.选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性.同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
| A. | locking | B. | having locked | C. | to lock | D. | locked |
| A. | pull back | B. | pull up | C. | pull through | D. | pull out |
| A. | to travel | B. | traveling | C. | to be traveling | D. | travel |
| A. | gave out | B. | picked up | C. | pulled over | D. | built up |
| 活动目的 | 为了更好地利用学习资料 |
| 活动组织者 | 学校学生会 |
| 活动时间 | 6月10日~20日 |
| 活动地点 | 校图书馆一楼 |
| 活动内容 | 倡议高三年级同学在毕业之际捐出用过的书等,赠给低年级同学. |
| 活动意义 | 1、活动得到老师们的支持和夸奖 2、该活动增进友谊,鼓励节约 |
| 个人看法 | 个人支持活动,并希望这样的活动以后还能继续开展下去 |
[写作要求]
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总句数.
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯.
参考词汇:增进promote 鼓励节约encourage economy
Dear editor,
I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Guangdong Province.
Inorder that we can make the best of learning materials,the Students'Union of our school is arranging anactivity,which will be held on the first floor ofthe school library from June 10 to 20.We studentsof Senior Three are called on to give away our used books,newspapers or magazines to the students in the lowergrades.The idea,which isintended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy,is highly praised and supported by the teachers andstudents alike.As a student,I am strongly for the activity because it is verymeaningful and helpful.
I hope that this kind ofactivity will continue in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.