Question

以下是你校最近一次主题活动的主要内容：

[写作内容]
请根据以上信息为你校的英语小报写一篇英文报道,并包括以下内容：
1. 活动的主题、对象、时间、地点和程序；
2. 如何做受欢迎的学生；
3. 活动产生的影响。
[写作要求]
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

Answer 1

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Last Wednesday afternoon, an activity on “how to become a popular student” was held for the students of Senior One in the school library. After analyzing some examples, the students had a discussion in groups and some teachers were invited to give us instructions. Finally, we came to a conclusion that a student should be well-behaved and study hard to become popular. What’s more, popular students are supposed to be thoughtful and polite and get along well with others as well. As a result, we have learned more about ourselves and everyone is determined to be a popular student.

试题分析：本作文主要以报道的形式，注意其格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。