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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
On January 5th，students in our school visited Robot World，which we saw a great diversity of robot．It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people，included playing chess，playing the piano and drawing pictures．What's more，the robots were in different kinds and shapes，which made us enjoyable．In addition，that excited me most is the show given by a group of robots．They danced just as if they were dancers on the stage．By visiting Robot World，I have learned a lot of about robots，especial about their functions and shapes．The great human wisdom is so powerful that it make us feel more comfortable live in the world．

分析 作者在本文中讲述了参观机器人展的所见和所感，机器人可以和真人一样做很多事情，从而感觉到人类智慧的强大将会使人们的生活越来越舒适．

解答 On January 5th，students in our school visited Robot World，which we saw a great diversity of robot．It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people，included playing chess，playing the piano and drawing pictures．What's more，the robots were in different kinds and shapes，which made us enjoyable．In addition，that excited me most is the show given by a group of robots．They danced just as if they were dancers on the stage．By visiting Robot World，I have learned a lot of about robots，especial about their functions and shapes．The great human wisdom is so powerful that it make us feel more comfortable∧live in the world．
详解：
1．which改为where；考查定语从句，先行词是Robot World，定语从句中缺少地点状语，故which改为where
2．robot改为robots；考查名词，a great diversity of 意为"多种多样的"，后面接可数名词复数形式．
3．amazed改为amazing；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词修饰物，过去分词作形容词修饰人，句子的主语是it，故用 mazing．
4．included改为including；考查分词作状语，句子的主语it与动词include存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词形式作状语．     
5．that改为what；考查名词性从句，what excited me most 是一个主语从句，疑问代词what在从句中作主语．        
6．is改为was；考查动词的时态，此处讲的是参观Robot World时的事情，发生在过去，故用一般过去时was．
7．of去掉；考查固定短语，a lot of 中of是介词，后面跟名称作宾语，a lot此处意为"许多"，表程度．                  
8．especial改为especially；考查副词，此处用副词形式在句中作状语．
9．make改为makes；考查主谓一致，本句陈述一个客观事实，主语it为单数形式，故动词用makes．  
10．live前加to；考查动词不定式，这是一个固定结构feel+adj+to do sth，意为"做某事感到…"．

点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．

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