Question

你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition）,班长希望大家积极参与。对此谈谈你的看法。字数：120左右
你的文章必须包括以下内容：
l. 你是否会参加比赛；
2. 你做出该决定的具体理由。
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Answer 1

Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition  than to dance myself.

解析试题分析：本书面表达是一种开放性作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要确定是参加还是不参加集体舞比赛，再根据所确定的写出其理由。再有写作过程中应该注意句子的衔接，高级词汇和高级句式的运用，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】范文一是赞成参加集体舞比赛的，该文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如call on，take an active part in，Generally speaking, enable sb. to do, make contributions to，以及谚语All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,还运用了which引导的非限性定语从句，so引导的倒装结构，动名词作主语等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：while，besides, 等等。
范文一是不赞成参加集体舞比赛的，该文中使用好的短语有：call on，take an active part in，a couple of，around the corner，participate in，give way，in this case。衔接句子的连词有：while，but，as，First and foremost，What’s more，because。高级句式及句型有：which引导的定语从句，动名词短语作主语，without引导的双重否定句等等。
考点：议论型作文