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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It is one and a half years since I had left the junior high school．However，there is one thing what I'll never forget．Every day our teacher asked some of us to give an English speech in front of the classmate．I felt worried because my spoken English was poorer，so I turned to Miss Lee for help．She gives me not only some valuable advice but also encouragement．She suggested I spent some time practicing every day．I followed his advice．When it was my turn to make the speech，I spoke very confident．And much to my joy，my speech was great success．Through this experience，I know when we have difficulty we should never be afraid to ask others with some help．

分析 本文讲述了一次演讲经历对自己的影响．
高中时，老师每天都会要求几个学生到教室前面演讲，我的口语不好，所以向老师求助，她给了我建议和鼓励．我的演讲很成功．通过这次经历我知道我们不要害怕求助于其他人的帮助．

解答 It is one and a half years since I had left the junior high school．However，there is one thing what I'll never forget．Every day our teacher asked some of us to give an English speech in front of the classmate．I felt worried because my spoken English was poorer，so I turned to Miss Lee for help．She gives me not only some valuable advice but also encouragement．She suggested I spent some time practicing every day．I followed his advice．When it was my turn to make the speech，I spoke very confident．And much to my joy，my speech was∧great success．Through this experience，I know when we have difficulty we should never be afraid to ask others with some help．
解析：
1．去掉had．考查动词的时态．It is one and a half years since I had left the junior high school比赛"自从我高中毕业已经一年半了"，所以since引导的从句用一般过去时态，因此去掉had．
2．what改成that/which 或去掉what．考查定语从句的关系词． 先行词one thing在定语从句I'll never forget做宾语，所以用that/which 或省略关系词．
3． classmate改为classmates．考查名词．the classmate指班上的学生，所以应该用复数 classmates．
4．poorer改成poor．考查形容词．本句表示"我的口语不好"，所以没有比较，应该用原级poor．
5．gives改成gave．考查谓语动词的时态．和上文呼应用一般过去时态，所以谓语动词用过去式gave．
6．spent改成spend．考查虚拟语气．主句She suggested 表示"她建议"，所以从句的谓语动词用（should）do，因此用spend．
7．his改成her．考查代词一致．和上文She呼应用her．
8．confident改成confidently．考查副词的用法．修饰动词 spoke 用副词confidently．
9．great前面加a．考查冠词．本句的success表示"演讲时一次成功的事"，所以是抽象名称具体化，因此great前面加a．
10．with改成for．考查介词．表示"请求某人帮助"用ask sb for help．

点评 考查短文改错．
since的用法：译作"自从…以来"
（1）接时间点：如 I have stayed in that country since 1995．要求：谓v．用现在完成时，而且须是延续性动词．
（2）接一段时间+ago：如 They have lived in that house since two years ago．要求：谓v．用现在完成时，而且须是延续性动词．
（3）接时间状语从句：如 I have loved her since I met her last time．/Lily has stayed at home since she left school．要求：主句的谓v．用现在完成时，而且须是延续性动词；从句的谓v．用一般过去时，而且须是终止性动词．
（4）用于句型"It's/It has been+一段时间+since+时间状语从句"中，译作"自从…以来，已经…（时间）了"．如 It's/has been three months since he moved to this city．要求：主句的谓v．用一般现在时或现在完成时；从句的谓v．用一般过去时，而且须是终止性动词．
（5）用于句型"一段时间+has passed since+时间状语从句"中，译作"自从…以来，…
（时间）已经过去了"．如上个例句还可写成：Three months has passed since he moved to this city．要求：主句的谓v．用现在完成时，而且动词必须是has passed；从句的谓v．用一般过去时，而且须是终止性动词．

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（--），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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