Question

12．阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Recently many universities have used the school beauty and a handsome boy as a way of advertising to attract new students．
Web celebrity Zhang Zetian，who is popularly known by her online nickname'Milk Tea Sister'appeared on the cover page of Tsinghua University's magazine，along with other famous people in the university in 2012．
Renmin University，a top university in Beijing featured graduation photos of a beautiful girl，Kang Yikun in 2013in its website's homepage．The photo won praise from netizens who said it showed the atmosphere of the graduation season in a creative way．
Famous school beauties and handsome boys also appeared in Wuhan University，Northwest University，Beijing Language and Culture University and many other schools．
Some approve of this way of advertising．A young writer，Zhang Lechen，who was born in the 1980s，said this promotional method was creative and had a strong visual impact and as a result was a much more effective way to communicate．
However，others argue against the method，saying that it is not a good way for the university to use attractive girls or boys to make advertisements．

[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词就"大学招生"这个话题谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
（1）你对大学利用美女、帅哥打招生广告的看法；
（2）你会根据大学哪些条件来决定报读；
（3）你希望在大学结识什么样的人．
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．
Recently many universities have used beautiful girls orhandsome boys to make advertisements to attract new students．Different people havedifferent attitudes towards it．Some are for it while others are against it．
While using the school beauty and a handsome boy in ads is aneffective way to catch our eye，I don't think it is an appropriate way for the university toattract new students．For one thing，senior school students won't choose the university just because there isa beautiful girl or handsome boy on campus．For another，it may mislead the value of us students，causing some of us to paytoo much attention to people's outer appearance rather than their inner beauty．
As for me，I will choose my ideal university based on its teaching staff，school culture and space forindependent thought and creativity instead of the so called"campus goddess"．
A good friend has a lifelong positive influence on us．Therefore，I hope to make acquaintanceof those who are learned，broad-minded and helpful in university．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：make advertisements （做广告），have different attitudes towards…（对…有不同的态度），be for …（赞成…），mislead the value of…（误导…的价值观），as for （关于），be based on…（在…基础之上），have a positive influence on…（对…有积极影响），make acquaintance of…（认识，结识…）．

解答 Recently many universities have used beautiful girls orhandsome boys to make advertisements to attract new students．Different people havedifferent attitudes towards it．Some are for it while others are against it．（概括）
While using the school beauty and a handsome boy in ads is aneffective way to catch our eye，I don't think it is an appropriate way for the university toattract new students．For one thing，senior school students won't choose the university just because there isa beautiful girl or handsome boy on campus．【高分句型】For another，it may mislead the value ofus students，causing some of us to pay too much attention to people's outerappearance rather than their inner beauty．【高分句型】（对大学利用美女、帅哥打招生广告的看法----不赞同）
     As for me，I will choose my ideal university based on its teaching staff，school culture and space forindependent thought and creativity instead of the so called"campus goddess"． （觉得报读大学的条件）
A good friend has a lifelong positive influence on us．Therefore，I hope to make acquaintanceof those who are learned，broad-minded and helpful in university．（希望在大学结识的人）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与 写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．