Question

假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Zhang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our biology when we were in Grade One. He taught very good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in biology. He often helps me with my study

patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher, he was respected or loved by all the students.

 

Answer 1

Mr. Zhang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our biology when we were in Grade

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One. He taught very good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. He usually made good

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preparations for the lessons and was strict in us. Each time when we made mistakes in our

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homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in biology. He often helps me with my study

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patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As∧experienced

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teacher, he was respected or loved by all the students.

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【解析】

试题分析：本文是记叙文，记叙的是一位让学生们敬仰爱戴的退休教师——张老师。

1. 张老师已经退休了是到目前的结果，不是发生在过去的过去，所以将过去完成时转成现在完成时。

2.well为副词做状语修饰动词。

3. teach后加双宾语，所以代词用宾格，不能采用物主代词。

4. be strict with sb.对某人要求严格。

5. Each time作为连词可直接引导时间状语从句，而且意为“每次”，比when更符合语境，故删除连词when。

6. them 指代之前提及的mistakes。

7. 老师过去经常帮助自己，所以应采用过去时。

8. progress为不可数名词无复数变化。

9. 为可数名词单数，所以之前需有限定词，且表达“作为一位有经验的老师”，experienced为元音开首，所以加冠词an。

10.or改为and。

考点：考查短文改错