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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

All hope was not lost. Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldier to Tang Shan to help the rescue workers. Hundred of thousands of people were helped. The army organize teams to dig out those which were trapped and to bury a dead. To the north of the city, most of the 10,000 miners were rescued at the coal mines there. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes have been destroyed. Fresh water were taken to the city by train, truck and plane. Slow, the city began to breathe again.

 

1.were-was

2.soldier加s

3.Hundred加s

4.organize加ed

5.which改为who

6.a dead.改为the

7.at--from

8.have--had

9.were--was

10.Slow--slowly

【解析】

1.】were-was 考查主谓一致。Hope 做主语时谓语动词用第三人称。

2.加s 考查名词的复数形式。根据150,000用复数形式。

3.加s 考查数词。Hundreds of 数以百计的。

4.加ed 考查动词的时态。整篇文章用一般过去时。

5.which改为who 考查定语从句。先行词是those people ,故定语从句用who来引导。

6. dead.改为the 考查冠词。The adj 表示一类人。

7.--from 考查介词。句意:许多的矿工从煤矿中被救出来。

8.--had 考查动词的时态。根据语境可知已经被破坏,过去的过去,用过去完成时。

9.】were—was 考查主谓一致。Water做主语时,谓语动词用单数形式。

10.—slowly 考查副词 句意:慢慢的,这个城市又开始了呼吸。

考点:短文改错。

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The taxi—driver takes the tourist everywhere.He shows him all monuments and all the museums.In the evening they go back to the hotel.The tourist gives the taxi-driver£100 and says,“What about tomorrow?” The taxi-driver looks at the tourist.“ Tomorrow? It’s another £100 tomorrow” But the tourist says,“That’s OK.If that’s the price,that is the price.See you tomorrow.”The taxi—driver is very pleased.

The next day the taxi-driver takes the tourist everywhere again.They visit all the museums and all the monuments again.And in the second evening they go back to the hotel.The tourist gives the taxi—driver another£100 and says,“I’m going home tomorrow.”The taxi-driver is sorry.He likes the tourist and,above all,£100 a day is good money.“So you are going home.Where do you come from?” he asks.

“I come from New York.”

“New York!” says the taxi-driver,“I have a sister in New York.Her name is Susannah.Do you know her?”

“Of course I know her.She gave me £200 for you.”

1.The tourist is__ __.

A.an Englishman B.an American

C.a Chinese D.a Frenchman

2.The tourist asks every taxi-driver his name because_____ _.

A.he knows of one of the taxi-drivers

B.he wants to remember all of the taxi-drivers’ names

C. he is afraid of being cheated

D.there is a friend of his among the taxi drivers

3.Why is the taxi-driver very pleased with the tourist?

A.His sister has brought so much money to him.

B.His sister knows the tourist.

C.None but the tourist agrees to the price given without arguing with him.

D.He wants to be the guide of the tourist.

4.We can conclude that _____ _.

A. the tourist will give the taxi-driver another£200

B.the taxi-driver insists that the tourist should pay him another£200

C.the tourist will give the taxi—driver half of the sum

D.the tourist makes fun of the taxi—driver

 

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A. Because she wanted to show respect for her.

B. Because she believed that made her seem closer to her.

C. Because she loved to see her parents’ responses to it.

D. Because she didn’t like her and thus made fun of her.

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A. owned the large farmhouse with Aunt Fannie

B. disliked Aunt Fannie’s meanness and the way she would never share

C. didn’t know the exact way to make the jam

D. tried to make Aunt Fannie believe that the secret recipe was safe

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A. was a reminder of the valuable things in her life

B. would bring her good luck and make her rich

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D. was the exact one that Aunt Fannie had received from her grandfather

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A. have a certain secret recipe

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