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4．假设英语课上，老师要求同桌之间互换修改作文，请修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
        2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Last weekend we go mountain climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us going．Set off very early，we went along an extreme narrow road，all in high spirits．On every side of the road was green fields and some farm houses．We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached the top of the  mountain．That surprised us most there was the beauty of scenes．After having short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought，we started going down．It rained even harder．We were wet to the skin，and we still sang and laughed happily．

分析 作者在本文中讲述了下雨天爬山的经历，尽管浑身都湿透了，但是却玩得很高兴．

解答 Last weekend we go mountain climbing．Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us going．Set off very early，we went along an extreme narrow road，all in high spirits．On every side of the road was green fields and some farm houses．We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter．At noon we reached the top of the mountain．Thatsurprised us most there was the beauty of scenes．After having∧short rest there and sharing with the food we had brought，we started going down．It rained even harder．We were wet to the skin，andwe still sang and laughed happily．
详解：
1：go改为went；考查动词的时态，根据时间状语Last weekend可知要用一般现在时．
2．set改为setting；考查分词作状语，主语we和动词set是主谓关系，故用现在分词形式作状语．
3：extreme改为extremely；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰形容词narrow． 
4：every改为each/either；考查近义词辨析，every三者或以上中的一个，each/either 指两者中的一个，根据常识路有两边，故用each/either．
5：was改为were；考查主谓一致，主语green fields and some farm houses为复数，故动词用复数形式were．
6：mixing改为mixed；考查分词作宾语补足语，此处mixed是形容词形式，作为补足语对宾语the sound of the rain and our footsteps 加以补充说明．
7：That改为What；考查名词性从句，这是一个主语从句，疑问代词what在从句中作主语，that在从句中不能做成分．
8：having 后加a；考查冠词，have a rest 是固定搭配，意为"休息一下，休息一会儿"．
9：去掉with；考查介词，share是及物动词，后面可直接加宾语，故把with去掉．
10：and改为but；考查连词，根据句意"我们都湿透了，但我们都开心地唱着，笑着"可知要用but表示上下文的转折．

点评 整体把握短文大意，弄清短文的基本时态，分析句子之间的结构关系，结合上下文语境运用词汇，语法等基础知识找出文中的错误并加以修改．

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