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I’m good at singing. I’ve been interested in music and dreamed of become a singer ever since my childhood. My parents began to teach me children’s songs until I was only three. After I started school I had more chances to enjoy various song, such as folk songs and popular songs, and practicing singing a lot. I like singing English songs as well, which greatly benefits me in my learning of English. 
Practice makes perfectly. I have made great progress in singing and my efforts have paid for. Last year, I take part in a talent show and won prize.I think everyone is unique and has our advantages in some respects. I know my singing skills still need to be improved. But I’m confidence that I will serve our society with my songs in the future.


【小题1】become 改为becoming
【小题2】until 改为 when
【小题3】Various song 改为Various songs
【小题4】practicing 改为practiced
【小题5】perfectly 改为perfect
【小题6】paid for改为pay off
【小题7】take part in 改为   took part in
【小题8】prize 前加 a
【小题9】our 改为 his 或者her
【小题10】confidence 改为confident

解析试题分析：文章介绍作者从小喜爱唱歌，学习唱歌，经常练习，最后他的努力有了回报，在才艺大赛中获奖，希望自己能用自己的歌声服务社会。
【小题1】dream of后面接动名词：become 改为becoming
【小题2】句意：当我三岁的时候，父母就教我唱歌。until 改为 when
【小题3】Various 各种各样的，后面接可数名词复数。song songs
【小题4】和had并列的谓语动词，用一般过去式practiced
【小题5】Practice makes perfect是谚语，熟能生巧。perfectly 改为perfect
【小题6】paid for是为…付钱， pay off有回报，
【小题7】因为是去年的事情，所以用一般过去式：take part in 改为   took part in
【小题8】prize 是可数名词，泛指“获了一个奖”，前加 a
【小题9】句意：每个人都是独特的，每个人都有自己的优点，用his 或者her指代everyone’s。
【小题10】句意：我很自信可以用我的歌曲服务社会。Be后面接形容词：confidence 改为confident
考点：考查短文改错

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：  1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词；
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2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
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