Question

请根据以下图表和要点提示，写一篇英语短文。

1.参考词汇：国家公务员考试the test for national civil servants

2.词数：150词左右

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

In the past three years, there has been an obvious increase in the number of college graduates who take the test for national civil servants. Compared with the figure of 2011 and 2012, it rose to 76.5% in 2013. That is to say, choosing to take the test for national civil servants has turned into a fever.

Many college graduates hold the opinion that if they succeed in passing the test, they will achieve their great aim of obtaining a steady/ stable job forever and they will live with comfort and relaxation, for being a civil servant is their most ideal occupation with few risks; meanwhile, it will bring them high salary.

Many experts think too many graduates make this choice, which results in too fierce competition. What’s more, college graduates should make proper choices when seeking for jobs which they are really interested in and suitable for.

From where I stand, we are supposed to look for jobs according to our own personality and interests. After all only by taking up jobs that they are interested in, one can make greater achievements in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文。请根据图表和要点提示，写一篇英语短文。首先要看懂图表内容，需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数150词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】In the past three years, there has been an obvious increase in the number of college graduates who take the test for national civil servants.这里含有一个定语从句；Many experts think too many graduates make this choice, which results in too fierce competition.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。What’s more, college graduates should make proper choices when seeking for jobs which they are really interested in and suitable for.这里含有一个定语从句。

考点：图表类书面表达