Question

假设你是李华，明天就是你的生日了，而且高考很快就要到了，你有很多话想对父母说。请你以书信的形式按照以下要点给父母写一封信。词数100 --- 120
写作要点：
1、感恩父母；
2、对父母的期望；
3、自己学习的打算。
Dear Mom and Dad,
Tomorrow is my birthday and the annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, _____________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mom and Dad,
Tomorrow is my birthday and the annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.
Through those years of my growing up, I always feel grateful to you for your unselfish help, care and love for me. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. It will be less than three months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me under great pressure. So I need your frequent support and timely help. Besides, I would like to talk more with you so that I will be always in a good state to study every day.
Mom and Dad, I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. It is also necessary for me to do some physical training so that I can keep fit. If possible, I will also help do some housework.
I am quite confident of my future life and I do wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。请你以书信的形式按照以下要点给父母写一封信。说出想说的话，要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you. 这句话用了感叹句和虚拟语气， It will be less than three months before I take the College Entrance Examination, which makes me under great pressure.这句话用了固定句型和非限制性定语从句， I would like to talk more with you so that I will be always in a good state to study every day. 这句话用的是so that引导的结果状语从句， It is also necessary for me to do some physical training so that I can keep fit.这句话用了it做形式主语， If possible, I will also help do some housework. 这句话用的是省略句，还有文章用了Besides,这样的关联词使文章更顺畅。