题目内容
7.在紧张的期末备考阶段,英语老师李老师为了提高学生的复习效率,广泛征求学生的意见.假如你叫李华,请根据以下内容提示,给李老师写封100词左右的信,表达你们的需求和建议.内容提示:
1.适当放慢复习进度,留出思考的时间;
2.反复训练重要的、易错的知识点;
3.减少作业量以保证质量.
写作要求:
1.词数不少于100;
2.开头、结尾已经给出;
3.词数100左右.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数.
Dear Miss Li,
Your's truly,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是半开放性作文.半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示.给考生自由发挥的余地较大.对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力.在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭.同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体
亮点句型一:As for those important points which also make us confused,would you please give us more practice in case we forget?至于那些让我们困惑的重要点,请你多练习一下好吗以防我们忘记了.此句中which引导的是限制性定语从句,被修饰的先行词为points,which在从句中做主语;in case"万一,以防"是连词,引导条件状语从句.
亮点句型二:We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.如果您能给我们一些不时的鼓励,我们将不胜感激.We would appreciate it if 用的是虚拟语气"如果…我们将不胜感激".
解答 Dear Miss Li,
We're so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision,what we need is solid foundation.As you know,we didn't learn well enough in the first two years,so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something.Besides,we need a little more time to think for ourselves.As for those important points which also make us confused,would you please give us more practice in case we forget(亮点句型一)?Meanwhile,we need your instruction,for example,how to write in natural English.I still have another request:assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.【表达需求】
By the way,we often feel frustrated,which has a very bad effect on our study.We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time(亮点句型二).【寻求建议】
Your's truly,
Li Hua.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧
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