Question

【题目】书面表达

你们班英语课上进行了一场有关偶像崇拜的讨论，同学们提出了不同的看法，请根据下面提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文。

注意：1.词数100左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2．可适当发挥，使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：偶像—idol；崇拜—worship

Our class have had a discussion about idol worship.

Answer 1

【答案】

Our class have had / held a discussion about idol worship. Some of my classmates consider that we need idols that have set good examples to us. And our idols' deeds can inspire us to make efforts to make progress. Besides, not a few（=many） famous people have benefited from idol worship since they experienced their roads to be famous.

However, others do not agree. They believe we never need idols and idol worship can do nothing but waste money and time which we should have spent on studies. What's worse, some unhealthy idol worship may do harm to(=be harm to) ourselves as well as others.

As for me, I’m against idol worship, but we must be aware that idol worship can't take the place of our efforts and our future will and should be created by our own hands.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语had / held a discussion进行讨论；set good examples to为…树立好榜样；make efforts努力；make progress进步；what's worse更为糟糕的是及They believe we never need idols and idol worship can do nothing but waste money and time which we should have spent on studies中所用的倒装句。