Question

You are finding it more and more difficult to communicate with your dad / mom, because
1. he / she can’ t understand you when sometimes you say “你已经out了”, “今天我们去FB一下吧” and so on;
2. he / she sometimes checks your cellphone or schoolbag, trying to find something secret belonging to you;
3. when you fail in an exam, he / she scolds (责备) more than comforts and encourages you.
根据上面提示用英语给你的爸爸或妈妈写一封信，反映你现在的心情，说说你的想法和希望。（任选以上一个原因、两个原因或三个原因进行陈述均可。）
词数120左右。（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。）
Dear Dad / Mom,
I love you, so I’ m writing to                                            
                                                                           
                                                                         
I would be very happy if you could accept my advice.

Answer 1

Dear Dad / Mom,
I love you, so I’m writing to talk about the three problems coming up in our daily life. I do hope you can take them seriously.
First, please learn something new, especially the languages popular among us teenagers, such as “You out” and “Let’s go to FB today”, because only in this way can we make ourselves understood. What’s more, those languages sound a little bit humorous, don’t they? Secondly, I don’t have any secrets you don’t know. Even if any, they are mine. So, please stop checking my cellphone or schoolbag, will you? Thirdly and also most importantly, I need your comfort and encouragement when I fail in an exam. You probably never know your scolding makes me lose heart and faith in myself.
I would be very happy if you could accept my advice.

这篇文章是应用文中常见的书信，要求学生根据前面的提示要求学生梳理出相关要求，是一种半开放性作文，对学生的要求比较高，在写作过程中可以运用较高级的词汇和句型来提高文章的档次，也要注意使用连接成分，使行文更流畅。