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短文写作(共一题,满分25分)
假设你叫李明,下面是你的一位外国笔友Kristie给你写的电子邮件,询问有关小悦悦事件的情况。
Dear Li Ming,
I learned from a news flash that a two-year-old baby girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town.I’m very shocked.I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago.So I doubt whether it was true news.Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?
Sincerely yours,
Kristie
请你给她回一封邮件,要点如下:
1.社会陷入自责和反思;
2.某些路人的冷漠或另有原因,可最终还是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出;
3.单个事件不能代表中国,助人为乐一直是中国传统美德。
注意:
1.不能照抄原信件语句;
2.可自由发挥添加细节;
3.词数120左右;
4.回信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:伦理道德- ethical and moral (adj.); 美德- virtue (n.)
Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits                                                               
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
Believe me, Kristie, and believe in the Chinese people!
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nation.All the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced with.
While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes.For various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidents.However, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior.
Luckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girl’s aid and helped rush her to hospital.So we have every reason to believe that the Chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain forever.
Believe me, Kristie, and believe in the Chinese people!
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
本文是一篇给材料作文,或者说半开放作文,写一封回信,你就有关小悦悦事件,向外国笔友Kristie写一份电子邮件,要点已经给出社会陷入自责和反思2.某些路人的冷漠或另有原因,可最终还是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出; 3.单个事件不能代表中国,助人为乐一直是中国传统美德。在行文中,我们可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。范文中就使用了合理的连词和较高级的语法结构,使文章结构严谨,增色不少。
【写作亮点】:句子:While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes和on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior.
。同时文章中使用了适当的关连词,比如    However,Luckily,So,等,使用文章结构严谨,浑然一体。
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阅读下面一则新闻,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
The headmaster of a middle school in southern England, David Hayes, has suspended(停课)students at his school 478 times over the past year—one in twenty of all the student suspensions in England.
Although some people believe that his actions go too far, he seems to be getting results. The number of students receiving “A” grades in the national senior school exam has increased from 48% in 2004 to 74% this year.
Mr Hayes says that many schools could achieves similar improvements if they improve their school students’ behavior. He also says the British government is wrong for pressuring schools not to suspend troublesome students and points out the harmful effects such students have on the quality of teaching and student learning. Suspensions often get many naughty students to improve their behavior, he says.
The school was below average in 2003. Mr Hayes joined the following year and now suspends two of the school’s 1880 students on average each school day. The total of 478 suspensions over the year means that almost one in four students have been punished this way. This year the school’s academic performance was judged as excellent.
【写作内容】
你在某英文报刊看到这则新闻后,准备就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评给该报编辑部,题目是“Should Schools Suspend Troublesome Students?”。内容要点包括:
1. 以约30词简要概括新闻内容:
2. 然后以约120词谈谈你的观点,内容包括:
(1)你是否支持该校长的做法,并陈述理由;
(2 ) 假设你是学校校长,谈谈你将如何处理违纪学生,并陈述理由。
【写作要求】
1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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