Question

18．以Facing the challenges of our life为题，写一篇120字左右的文章，内容包括：
1．你认为应当如何看待生活中的考验．
2．举例说明你经历过的一次困难或考验，及如何应对．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：点明主题如何看待生活中的挑战，举例说明，总结观点；其次要注意以第一人称来现身说法；最后要注意举例时，要用一般过去时态，表达过去的事实．表明观点和总结时，要用一般现在时态．
重点短语和句型：
be of+名词，表示事物的特征和属性
overcome difficulties 克服困难
remind sb of sth 让某人想起某事
stick to the end 坚持到最后
come across 遇到
make the best of sth 充分利用
Only by facing and overcoming difficulties in our life can we grow up happily and healthily．
句中only加状语提前，句子要部分倒装．
It was the first time I had lived away from my home，so I found it difficult to fit in．
句中it was the first time后接从句时，从句要用过去完成时态，和前面的was保持一致；find it+形容词+动词不定式，it作形式宾语，正在的宾语是后面的动词不定式．
the  difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life．
句中I came across作difficulties的定语，是一个定语从句．
Let's learn to regard the challenges of life we are facing as a stepping-stone to future success and make the best of them!
句中we are facing作challenges的定语，是一个定语从句；and连接并列谓语．

解答 Challenges of life are of great importance in our growth．As the saying goes，"No cross，no crown．"Only by facing and overcoming difficulties in our life can we grow up happily and healthily．（高分句型一）（点题）
 It reminds me of my experience when I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school．It was the first time I had lived away from my home，so I found it difficult to fit in．（高分句型二）And the training officer was strict with us．I once thought I couldn't stick to the end．But anyway，I made it．The trials made it easier for me to adapt to life in high school，and the  difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life．（高分句型三）（举例）
In short，life consists of not only sunshine but also hardships．We should be brave in front of difficulties．Let's learn to regard the challenges of life we are facing as a stepping-stone to future success and make the best of them!（高分句型四）（总结）

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．