Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字及图片，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Many students in China regard passing the college entrance examination as the ultimate (终极的) goal of academic life. Almost all students study hard up to senior high school to get higher grades in every subject, and be in a better position to excel in gaokao and get admitted to a “good” university, fewer challenges lie between them and a college diploma. Therefore, quite a few students, over-burdened with studies since their primary school days, lose interest in studies, let alone excelling in academics after entering a university.

However, getting a college degree now requires more effort than it did before. In September, the Ministry of Education released an announcement, requiring universities to increase the difficulty of undergraduate courses and work harder to end academic misconduct in bachelor’s theses (毕业论文). Universities will reasonably increase students’ academic burden to encourage them to work harder and improve their knowledge and skill levels.

However, while the Ministry of Education’s plans aim to increase university students’ academic burden, they’re not intended to put extra pressure on them. Instead, the new requirements are meant to fulfill the basic requirements of university education.

[写作内容]

1. 用约30个单词概括上述信息的主要内容；

2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：

(1) 你对“大学生增负”持什么观点？说明你的理由(至少两点)；

(2) 你进入大学后将如何度过你的大学生活？

[写作要求]

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，语数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Many college students, who once worked hard to achieve high gaokao scores, lose interest in studies and fail to acquire outstanding academic abilities. Fortunately, a change in college education is on the way.

I firmly back up the act that universities reasonably increase students’ academic burden. Firstly, to ensure the high quality of education, universities should keep students under competitive pressure by assigning the challenging tasks. Secondly, university life is widely acknowledged to be an important time in shaping young people’s personalities and values, so they should take advantage of it. Lastly, to gain an edge in future careers, students are expected to study harder to equip themselves with more knowledge and skills.

When I enter university, I will cherish my university life by making it busy but valuable. I will pursue learning as much as possible, visit libraries constantly and participate in various activities, in which way I devote myself to enriching my university life.

【解析】

本篇书面表达要求考生完成读写任务。首先考生要简要总结文章内容，其次就文章内容发表自己的看法，最后阐明如何度过自己的大学时光。

第一步：审题

体裁：夹叙夹议

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分

要求：1.总结文章

2. 对“大学生增负”的观点和原因

3. 如何度过自己的大学生活

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

lose interest in / fail to do/ on the way/back up/ academic burden/ competitive / shape people’s personalities and values/ take advantage of /be expected to / equip …with /participate in /devote to

第三步：连词成句

Many college students lose interest in studies and fail to acquire outstanding academic abilities.

Fortunately, a change in college education is on the way.

I firmly back up the act that universities reasonably increase students’ academic burden. Firs

To ensure the high quality of education, universities should keep students under competitive pressure by assigning the challenging tasks.

University life is widely acknowledged to be an important time in shaping young people’s personalities and values, so they should take advantage of it.

To gain an edge in future careers, students are expected to study harder to equip themselves with more knowledge and skills.

When I enter university, I will cherish my university life by making it busy but valuable.

I will pursue learning as much as possible, visit libraries constantly and participate in various activities.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词）

1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to start with; firstly；in the end,；at last…

2. 表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least…

3. 表因果关系：because; as; so…

第五步：修改润色 (加入从句或高级词汇)