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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
The most important festival in Tibet is the Tibetan New Year，in January 1st of the Tibetan calendar．It is for say goodbye to the past year an welcoming the New Year．From mid-December，people start to prepare or do festival shopping．A lot of activity are held in the streets of the Lhasa during the New Year Festival．There is an interested competition on this day．A young man from each family tried to get the first bucket of water from the river．It is believed be gold water．According to the Tibetan tradition，they will bring good luck，happiness and wealth to those which get it．

分析 本文主要介绍藏族新年的风俗．

解答 The most important festival in Tibet is the Tibetan New Year，in January 1st of the Tibetan calendar．It is for say goodbye to the past year an welcoming the New Year．From mid-December，people start to prepare or do festival shopping．A lot of activity are held in the streets of the Lhasa during the New Year Festival．There is an interested competition on this day．A young man from each family tried to get the first bucket of water from the river．It is believed∧be gold water．According to the Tibetan tradition，they will bring good luck，happiness and wealth to those which get it．
详解：
1．in改为on 考查介词．January 1st指特定的一天，用介词on．
2．say改为saying 考查动名词．for是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
3．or改为and 考查连词．prepare和do是并列关系，而非选择关系，用连词and．
4．activity改为activities 考查名词．activity是可数名词，其前有a lot of修饰时用复数形式．
5．去掉the 考查冠词．Lhasa是地名，其前不加冠词．
6．interested改为interesting 考查现在分词．修饰物要用现在分词．
7．tried改为tries 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，要用一般现在时态，因主语A young man单数形式，谓语动词也应用单数三人称形式．
8．加to 考查动词不定式．句型It is believed to do sth．意为"据相信做某事"．
9．they改为it 考查代词．it指代上文的gold water．
10．which改为who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词those指人，在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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RIO DE JANEIRO-China claimed its first cycling Olympic gold after Gong Jinjie and Zhong Tianshi won the women's team sprint in the Rio Olympic Velodrome（自行车赛车场） on Friday．
The Chinese due beat Daria Shmeleva and Anastasiia Voinova of Russia in the final to take the gold，while the bronze went to Germany who defeated Australia．Gong Jinjie and Zhong Tianshi set a new world record of 31.928 seconds in the first round after breaking an Olympic record in the qualifying round．Gong and Zhong's achievement is inseparable from their French coach Benoit Vetu's training．
"I moved my family to China for this job．It's to achieve this dream that I have stayed in the cycling training base．It was a hard decision，but it worth it．I have no regrets now，"Vetu told chinadaily．com．cn．
Under Benoit Vetu's coaching，Gong and Zhong won in their debut at the Incheon Asian Games after teaming up in 2014．And at the 2015 UCI World Track Cycling Championships，they won the gold by breaking the world record．
As they improved continually in their races，their trust into Vetu also increased．"We trust each other，and there are no problems in our cooperation．We admire him，and he feels the same way about us．He understands us，is familiar with our emotions and when to encourage us，"Gong told chinadaily．com．cn about their coach after the race．

21．The text is mainly talks aboutA．
A．China wins first cycling Olympic gold，owes glory to French coach
B．Winner's thought on cycling Olympic game
C．Cycling Championships won the gold in 2015
D．Succeeding in the game as trusting each other
22．Who won the silver medal in the Rio Olympic Velodrome？B
A．Gong Jinjie and Zhong Tianshi       
B．Daria Shmeleva and Anastasiia Voinova
C．Benoit Vetu                      
D．Germany player
23．The passage is likely take fromC．
A．newspaper                       B．magazine
C．website                         D．drama．
1．Thomas Hardy，probably the most searching and knowledgeable novelist of our time，was born on June 2，1840，in Dorsetshire，England．He died on January 11，1928．In his youth，Hardy read much and dreamt of becoming a poet，but he studied and practiced architecture as an assistant to a London architect，winning a prize for design．The fine descriptions of structure in his novels were probably somewhat due to his architectural training．
    For five years he worked hard to practise writing poetry，but when he was twenty-seven，Hardy turned to fiction．His first story was accepted two years later，but upon the advice of George Meredith he decided not to publish it．His first novel，Desperate Remedies，appeared in 1871．During the next twenty-five years he published fourteen novels and two collections of short stories．
    Under the Greenwood Tree （1872）he never surpassed（超越）in happy and delicate perfection of art．This and his next novel，A pair of Blue Eyes （1873），begin to show deep irony（讽刺） which is so obvious throughout Hardy's writings．
    Far from the madding Crowd （1874）was his first popular success．In it is shown Hardy's amazing power of describing nature as symbolic background for his characters，an organic part of the action of his story．This was the earliest of what he called his novels of character and environment，which included The Return of the Native，Tess of D'Urbervilles，his masterpiece，and Jude the Obscure．Not until he was fifty-eight years old was his first collection of poems published，and he was sixty-four when the first part of The Dymats，surprised the literary world．

24．How did Thomas Hardy benefit from his architectural career？D
A．He could practice writing while working．
B．He made a lot of money to support his writing．
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D．He applied architectural knowledge in his novels．
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B．One of his best collections of poems．
C．His best novel in perfection of art．
D．His first popular success．
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A．Desperate Remedies．B．A pair of Blue Eyes．
C．Tess of D'Urbervilles D．The Dymats．
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economize．
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Peer Tutoring
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Meetings：See above explanation．
Advisor：Ms Debbie Zare，dzare@lfschools．net
Scout Buddies
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B．Environmental Club．
C．Young Idea．
D．Scout Buddies．
2．When is the staff of Young Idea most likely to meet？B
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D.7：00 p．m．，September 23，Friday
3．What is the requirement for students to join a certain club？D
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B．They need to be athletic to join Scout Buddies．
C．They need to win a literary award to join Young Idea．
D．They need to be academically proficient to join Peer Tutoring．

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