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短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone could give the hand when someone else is in need.

 

【答案】

 usually-usual

 while-when

 hear-heard

  shocking-shocked

 peoples-people

 去掉had

 but-and

 his-my

 在proud 后加of

 the改成a

【解析】

试题分析：

 词组as usual象平常一样

 while表示一段时间，when表示一个时间点，suddenly I hear someone crying for help.属于时间点

 这篇文章用的是过去时：hear-heard

  shocking一般修饰物，shocked 一般修饰人，这句话是修饰I。

 people是集体名词，不加复数

 句意：我一边脱下衣服，一边从人群挤过去，take off和push是同时发生的，用过去时，去掉had

 句意：我一边脱下衣服，一边从人群挤过去，和跳进水里是并列关系，用and

 句意：使我宽慰的是，孩子得救了：his-my

 be proud of后面接宾语从句

 give a hand是“助一臂之力”

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。

 

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