Question

“地球一小时”是世界自然基金会(WWF)为应对全球气候变化所提出的一项倡议，希望个人、社区、企业和政府在特定的时间熄灯一小时，来表明他们应对气候变化行动的支持。
请根据以下要点写一份不少于l00词的英文倡议书，动员大家加入“地球一小时,人类一大步”活动。要点如下：
1. 地球面临的气候威胁；
2. 鼓励同学们关灯或其他电器一小时；
3. 发动身边的每个人参与；
4. 养成节能的习惯，为环保作更大贡献。
参考词汇：气候climate；威胁threat；把……关掉switch off
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Answer 1

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With the global climate becoming warmer and warmer, our earth is faced with great threat. As a senior school student, I believe it is everyone’s duty to do something to save our home. Earth Hour is an activity that we can take part in. Let’s switch off our lights and computers, etc. for one hour at a certain time. It’s an easy job for us but a huge amount of energy will be saved if all of us do it together. More people will realize the problem our earth faces and will start to take action. Let’s develop the good habit of saving energy in our daily life and try to make more contributions to our environment.

解析试题分析：题目要求写一份英文倡议书，呼吁大家加入“地球一小时,人类一大步”的环保活动。作文要点已经列出，但不要局限于只翻译每个要点，还要注意作文的上下文衔接。使用第一人称来写，这样能更有说服力。多使用高级词汇和重要句型，注意卷面的整洁。
【亮点说明】范文使用短语is faced with, take part in, switch off, take action, make contributions to等，使作文内容比较充实。范文使用了较多的重要句型：with复合结构With the global climate becoming；固定句型it is everyone’s duty to do...；定语从句an activity that we can和the problem our earth faces。范文最后使用祈使句Let’s...来动员大家参与进来，达到了写作的目的。
考点：材料类作文