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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

  It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but he rode it every day. One morning,he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard,he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted,but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian,he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What’s more,he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard. “To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling. But I am a Christian and I forgive him!”When he left for home the next morning,at the end of the driveway,the bike was back with new brakes.

 It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but that and he rode it every day. One morning,he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard,he saw a man loading it into his Running car. He shouted,but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian,

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 Here are tips for a successful speech from a professional speechwriter:

No speech should last more than 20 minutes.1.      The Sermon on the Mount,a collection of sayings and teachings of Jesus,for example,lasted hardly more than three minutes.

  Focus on one topic. We’re human beings and tend to have lots of thoughts,opinions and ideas. You have to make the proper selection. 2.       Include and expand only those that explain and support your viewpoint (观点).

  3.       It’s important to remember that your words must be hearable and understandable.

  Humour is vital.4.      Ronald Reagan always wanted to joke at the start of a speech because he needed the quick victory of laughter. It helped him relax. It also helped the audience relax.

  Don’t forget to say thanks. You should always,at the beginning of the speech,thank the person who invited you and introduced you.5.      While you’re doing it,the audience gets a chance to daydream and settle down. They’re going to daydream at some point anyway,and it may as well be before you get to the heart of your remarks.

   A. Choose your words carefully.

   B. And saying thanks at the beginning has a practical purpose.

   C. First you have to work out what you’re going to say.

   D. Every speech needs it,and you need it,too,probably at the beginning.

   E. Stick to one subject -the future of the soccer club,for example.

   F. This process takes time,so start once you begin thinking about the speech.

   G. The more important the message is,the less time it requires to say it.

  Around twenty years ago I was living in New York.1       I had a lot of experience and a master’s degree,I could not find 2        work.

I was 3       a school bus to make ends meet and 4        with a friend of mine,for I had lost my flat. I had 5        five interviews (面试) with a company and one day between bus runs they called to say I did not 6        the job. “Why has my life become so 7        ?” I thought painfully.

As I pulled the bus over to 8       a little girl,she handed me an earring 9        I should keep it 10        somebody claimed (认领) it. The earring was painted black and said “BE HAPPY”.

  At first I got angry. Then it 11        me—I had been giving all of my 12        to what was going wrong with my 13      rather than what was right!I decided then to make a 14      of fifty things I was happy with. Later,I decided to 15        more things to the list. That night there was a phone call for 16        from a lady who was a director at a large 17      . She asked me if I would 18       a one-day lecture on stress (压力) management to 200 medical workers. I said yes.

  My 19        went very well,and before long I got a well-paid job. To this day I know that it was because I changed my way of 20        that I completely changed my life.

(   ) 1. A. As   B. Though

       C. If   D. When

(   ) 2. A. successful   B. extra

      C. satisfying   D. convenient

(   ) 3. A. driving   B. repairing

      C. taking   D. designing

(   ) 4. A. working   B. travelling

      C. discussing   D. living

(   ) 5. A. prepared for   B. attended

      C. asked for   D. held

(   ) 6. A. lose   B. like

      C. find   D. get

(   ) 7. A. hard   B. busy

       C. serious   D. short

(   ) 8. A. wave at   B. drop off

       C. call on   D. look for

(   ) 9. A. ordering   B. promising

      C. saying   D. showing

(   ) 10. A. in case   B. or else

       C. as if   D. now that

(   ) 11. A. hurt   B. hit

       C. caught   D. moved

(   ) 12. A. feelings   B. attention

       C. strength   D. interests

(   ) 13. A. opinions   B. education

       C. experiences   D. life

(   ) 14. A. list   B. book

       C. check   D. copy

(   ) 15. A. connect   B. turn

       C. keep   D. add

(   ) 16. A. her   B. a passenger

       C. me   D. my friend

(   ) 17. A. hospital   B. factory

       C. restaurant   D. hotel

(   ) 18. A. listen to   B. review

       C. give   D. talk about

(   ) 19. A. plan   B. choice

       C. day   D. tour

(   ) 20. A. operation   B. speaking

       C. employment   D. thinking

  Kids’ health : four steps for fighting stress 

  Everybody gets stressed time to time.1.        Some ways of dealing with stress- like screaming or hitting someone——don’t solve (解决) much. But other ways,like talking to someone you trust,can lead you to solving your problem or at least feeling better.

  Try taking these four steps the next time you are stressed :

  (1) Get support. When you need help,reach out to the people who care about you. Talk to trusted adults,such as parents or other relatives.

2.        They might have had similar problems,such as dealing with a test,or the death of a beloved pet.

  (2) Don’t take it out on yourself. Sometimes when kids are stressed and upset they take it out on themselves. Oh,dear,that’s not a good idea. Remember that there are always people to help you.

3.       

  (3) Try to solve the problem. After you’re calm and you have support from adults and friencLs,it’s time to get down to business.

4.        Even if you can’t solve it all,you can solve a piece of it.

  (4) Be positive. Most stress is temporary (暂时的) .Remember stress does go away,especially when you figure out the problem and start working on solving it. These steps aren’t magic,but they do work. And if you can stay positive as you make your way through a tough time,you’ll help yourself feel better even faster.

5.       

   A. Ask for a helping hand to get you through the tough situation.

   B. Notice your friends’ feelings and find a way to help them.

   C. Different people feel stress in different ways.

   D. Ah,it feels so good when the stress is gone.

   E. You need to figure out what the problem is.

   F. And don’t forget about your friends.

   G. Then,find a way to calm down.

  When my brother and I were young,my mum would take us on Transportation Days.

It goes like this: You can’t take any means of transportation more than once. We would start from home,walking two blocks to the rail station. We’d take the train into the city centre,then a bus,switching to the tram,then maybe a taxi. We always considered taking a horse carriage in the historic district,but we didn’t like the way the horses were treated,so we never did. At the end of the day,we took the subway to our closest station,where Mum’s friend was waiting to give us a ride home—our first car ride of the day.

  The good thing about Transportation Days is not only that Mum taught us how to get around. She was born to be multimodal (多方式的).She understood that depending on cars only was a failure of imagination and,above all,a failure of confidence—the product of a childhood not spent exploring subway tunnels.

  Once you learn the route map and step with certainty over the gap between the train and the platform,nothing is frightening anymore. New cities are just light-rail lines to be explored. And your personal car,if you have one,becomes just one more tool in the toolbox—and often an inadequate one,limiting both your mobility and your wallet.

  On Transportation Days,we might stop for lunch on Chestnut Street or buy a new book or toy,but the transportation was the point. First,it was exciting enough to watch the world speed by from the train window. As I got older,my mum helped me unlock the mysteries that would otherwise have paralyzed my first attempts to do it myself: How do I know where to get off? How do I know how much it costs? How do I know when I need tickets,and where to get them? What track,what line,which direction,where’s the stop,and will I get wet when we go under the river?

  I’m writing this right now on an airplane,a means we didn’t try on our Transportation Days and,we now know,the dirtiest and most polluting of them all. My flight routed me through Philadelphia. My multimodal mum met me for dinner in the airport. She took a train to meet me.

(   ) 1. Which was forbidden by Mum on Transportation Days?

   A. Having a car ride.

   B. Taking the train twice.

   C. Buying more than one toy.

   D. Touring the historic district.

(   ) 2. According to the writer,what was the greatest benefit of her Transportation Days?

   A. Building confidence in herself.

   B. Reducing her use of private cars.

   C. Developing her sense of direction.

   D. Giving her knowledge about vehicles.

(   ) 3. The underlined word “paralyzed”(in Para. 5) is closest in meaning to      

   A. displayed   B. justified

   C. ignored   D. ruined

(   ) 4. Which means of transportation does the writer probably disapprove of?

   A. Airplane.

   B. Subway.

   C. Tram.

   D. Car.

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