题目内容
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat.Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us think.Last Sunday my parent were away on business.I left alone,with no one to cook for me.As I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal.Early in the morning I went to the market,buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back.Before cooking,I put a few oil,salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it together.When the pot was hotter enough I began to fry the steak.Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it.The food tasted deliciously!
分析 作者在本文讲述了父母出差,自己一人在家为自己做饭的一次经历.
解答 I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat.Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us think.Last Sunday my parent were away on business.I∧left alone,with no one to cook for me.As I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal.Early in the morning I went to the market,buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back.Before cooking,I put a few oil,salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it together.When the pot was hotter enough I began to fry the steak.Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it.The food tasted deliciously.
详解:
1.去掉of;考查介词,of是介词后面要跟名词或名词性短语,此处去掉of,a lot意为"许多",修饰easier,表示程度.
2.parent改为parents;考查名词单复数,根据句意"我的父母"可知此处要用复数形式.
3.left前面加was;考查动词的语态,结合语境分析,主语I与动词left是被动关系,即"我被单独留下",故加was构成被动语态.
4.As改为So;考查连词,此处用so引导一个结果状语从句,意为"因此我有了一个为自己做饭的机会".
5.buying改为bought;考查并列成分,这里buy与前面的went和后面的came是并列谓语,时态保持一致,故用一般过去式bought.
6.few改为little;考查同义词辨析,a few修饰可数名词,a little修饰不可数名词,此处oil不可数,故用little.
7.it改为them;考查人称代词,此处人称代词指代前面的oil,salt和sugar,故用复数them.
8.hotter改为hot;考查形容词,此处不含比较的意思,用形容词hot作was的表语,意为"当锅足够热的时候…".
9.the改为an;考查冠词,此处用不定冠词an泛指"一个".
10.deliciously改为delicious;考查形容词,此处用形容词形式delicious作tasted的表语.
点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文,了解短文基本大意,确定文章的基本时态,再运用语法,词汇,习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子,找出文中的错误加以修改.
To my(42)D,I had to drive a school bus to (43)B my family.At the same time,I had some (44)C with different companies but they all(45)D to say I did not get the job.I went to the bus barn(车库),feeling (46)B.
Later that afternoon,(47)A doing my rounds through the town I had an inner wave rise from deep (48)B me and I thought"Why has my (49)C become so hard?"…
Immediately after this internal(内心的) scream,I (50)B the bus over to drop off a little girl.As she (51)D she handed me an earring saying I should keep it (52)D somebody looked for it.The(53)A was stamped with words"BE HAPPY"Then it struck me.I had been putting all of my(54)D into what was wrong with my life rather than what was (55)B!
One night there was a phone call for me from the(56)D at a large hospital.She asked me whether I(57)B do a one-day training for 200hospital workers.I said (58)C and got the job.
My day with the hospital workers (59)A very well.I got a great (60)C and many more days of work.To this day I know that it was because I changed my attitude to life.
| 41.A.satisfying | B.probable | C.particular | D.considerate |
| 42.A.joy | B.luck | C.surprise | D.shame |
| 43.A.meet | B.support | C.supply | D.provide |
| 44.A.meetings | B.conferences | C.interviews | D.reports |
| 45.A.came | B.expected | C.hoped | D.called |
| 46.A.excited | B.disappointed | C.worried | D.frightened |
| 47.A.while | B.though | C.unless | D.until |
| 48.A.beyond | B.inside | C.upon | D.beside |
| 49.A.study | B.bus | C.life | D.position |
| 50.A.carried | B.pulled | C.brought | D.held |
| 51.A.took off | B.put off | C.gave off | D.got off |
| 52.A.as long as | B.now that | C.as soon as | D.in case |
| 53.A.earring | B.watch | C.necklace | D.bag |
| 54.A.money | B.ideas | C.strength | D.energies |
| 55.A.real | B.right | C.happy | D.sad |
| 56.A.nurse | B.worker | C.patient | D.manager |
| 57.A.should | B.could | C.must | D.ought |
| 58.A.no | B.hello | C.yes | D.nothing |
| 59.A.went | B.looked | C.fit | D.appeared |
| 60.A.comfort | B.shock | C.welcome | D.excuse. |