Question

某英语报社正在征集关于目前减肥问题的短文，假如你是某校的学生李华，请根据下列要求给该报社编辑发一封电子邮件，谈谈你对减肥这一现象的认识和你认为较好的减肥方法，并陈述理由。
要点提示：

减肥趋势	减肥已成为当今女性的一种时尚
减肥方法	节食，运动，药物，手术
减肥产品	减肥药、减肥茶、减肥器械
减肥效果	效果不一，有的甚至带来副作用
你的看法及理由……

注意：1. 词数：120左右；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯；4. 参考词汇：器械 equipment。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student in a high school.
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Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student in a high school.
Nowadays, losing weight has become popular among young and middle-aged women. In order to make themselves pretty, they try to use different ways to lose weight. Some go on a diet, some take exercise, some take medicines, and others even turn to operations for help. As a result, lots of products have been made for losing weight. Special medicine, tea and equipment are provided in the market, which are used in different ways and work differently, but some have side effects.
In my opinion, it is understandable that women seek beauty but they should do it in a proper way. Eating a balanced diet and taking more exercise are the ways that I most support, as the other ways are likely to do harm to people’s health more or less.
Best wishes!
                    Yours,
                                                             Li Hua

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