题目内容
15.假如你是某中学学生李华,刚从美国交流学习回来.你的美国好友Simon送给你一款MP3播放器.请你根据一下提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,表示你非常喜欢这件礼物.1.你喜欢礼物的原因;2.礼物带给你的好处; 3.你的期待和愿望.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Simon,
How's everything?Thank you for your nice gift! .
Best wishes!
Li Hua.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给送给李华一款MP3播放器的美国好友Simon写一封电子邮件,表示非常喜欢这件礼物,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:你喜欢礼物的原因;礼物带给你的好处;你的期待和愿望.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为喜欢礼物的原因.第二部分为礼物带来的好处.第三部分为作者的期待和愿望.
重点短语与句型:
play an important part in 在…中起重要作用
improve the ability提高能力
In addition除…外
a large number of 许多,大量的
高分句型一:It's tiny and looks pretty so I'm always taking it with me wherever I go.此句用了连词so引导结果状语从句以及wherever引导让步状语从句
高分句型二:It often reminds me of the happy days we spent together.此句we spent together是定语从句,修饰先行词the happy days.
解答 Dear Simon,
How's everything?Thank you for your nice gift.I like it very mnch.It's tiny and looks pretty so I'm always taking it with me wherever I go(高分句型一).I also find it qnite easy to operate with areasomable design.(喜欢礼物的原因)
Now,it is playing an important part in my life.With it,I am able to listen to English regularly which helps improve my listening ability.In addition,I can enjoy a large number of songs whenever possible.(礼物带来的好处)
It often reminds me of the happy days we spent together.(高分句型二 )I hope to visit your conntry again I am looking forward to your visit to China this summer!(作者的期待和愿望)
Best wishes!
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
| A. | which | B. | when | C. | whose | D. | where |
| A. | looks | B. | is looked | C. | is looking | D. | is being looked |
| A. | approaches | B. | means | C. | methods | D. | ways |
| A. | anywhere | B. | everywhere | C. | somewhere | D. | nowhere |