Question

假如你是李华，下星期六是你的生日，你准备在家开一个生日晚会，并邀请部分同学和外国朋友参加，晚会7：30开始。你家住在民族街（Minzu Street）656号，乘23路或40路公共汽车在一中站下车。你家就在车站的对面。房子是红色的。门是白色的，很容易找到。请根据所给信息，给你的好友Jack写一封邀请信。
注意： 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
656 Minzu Street 
November 2, 2013
Dear Jack, 
Next Saturday will be my birthday. ___________________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

656 Minzu Street 
November 2, 2013
Dear Jack,
Next Saturday will be my birthday. I’m going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7:30. Some classmates as well as some foreign friends are also invited. The activities include singing, dancing and sharing interesting experiences. Surely, we’ll have a good time. I would feel honored if you could come.
I live at 656 Minzu Street. You can take Buses No 23 or No 40 and get off at the stop of  No.One High School. Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door. I’m sure you can’t miss it.
I do hope you will come.
Best wishes.
Yours, 
Li Hua

试题分析：本题为材料作文，根据高考的评分要求，从两个方面分析题目。一是内容：题目中围绕生日派对展开，涉及到了派对的时间，地点，交通方式及建筑有什么特点，方便来访者能够找到等内容，所以在审题时要把内容审全。二是语言方面。要有好的句式结构，起到画龙点晴的作用。例如，固定结构，倒装，强调等。
【亮点说明】所给范文内容齐全，且安排合适，文意紧凑，同时也做到了言简意骇。
考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力