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5．第一节 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Now I want to tell you something what happened last weekend．On my way to the cinema，I noticed a foreigner talk to a policemen who seemed able to understand what the foreigner was saying．They two looked very worriedly．So I went up to see what I could do help them．I told the policeman the foreigner had lost his wallet or camera．Finally the foreigner got back his belonging with the help of the policeman．All of them thanked me．By the time I arrived at the cinema，the film have been over．Although I'd missed the film，but I was very happy because I had helped others with my efforts．
分析 作者在本文讲述了上个周末在去看电影的路上遇到一位外国人和一位警察在语言沟通上遇到问题，作者于是上前帮助他们，尽管后来错过了那场电影，但作者却因为帮助了别人而感到高兴．
解答 Now I want to tell you something what happened last weekend．On my way to the cinema，I noticed a foreigner talk to a policemen who seemed able to understand what the foreigner was saying．They two looked very worriedly．So I went up to see what I could do∧help them．I told the policeman the foreigner had lost his wallet or camera．Finally the foreigner got back his belonging with the help of the policeman．All of them thanked me．By the time I arrived at the cinema，the film have been over．Although I'd missed the film，but I was very happy because I had helped others with my efforts
详解：
1．what 改为that；考查关系代词，分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词something是不定代词，关系代词只能用that．
2．talk 改为talking；考查动词，notice sbsb do sthsth表示注意到某人做过某事，notice sb doing sth 表示注意到某人正在做某事；根据句意"我发现一位外国人正在和一名警察讲话"，故此处用notice sb doing 结构．
3．able 改为unable；考查句意，结合上下文分析句意为"他看起来好像不理解外国人在说什么"，故用否定形式unable．
4．worriedly改为worried；考查形容词，此处用形容词形式作look的表语．
5．do后面加to；考查动词不定式，此处用不定式在句中做目的状语．
6．or 改为and；考查连词，分析句意为"这位外国人丢失了钱包和照相机"，故用and连接，or意为"或者"，表示选择．
7．belonging改为belongings；考查名词，belong是可数名词，根据上文可知，外国人丢失了钱包和相机两样东西，故此处用复数形式belongs．
8．all改为both；考查代词，all和both都意为"都"，但是both指两者，all指三者或以上．
9．have 改为has；考查主谓一致，主语the film 是但是形式，所以动词要用第三人称单数形式has．
10．去掉but；考查连词，although引导让步状语从句时可与yet/still连用，但不能与but连用，故去掉but．
点评 阅读短文，了解大意，确定基本时态；运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系，找出文中错误加以修改．
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