题目内容
【题目】写作题(20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:视频video![]()
【答案】One possible version:
Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. Having had a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.
Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time,which surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
【解析】高分句型:
句型一:
Having had (1)a heated discussion,we agreed on (2)making a video to record our experiences at school.经过热烈的讨论,我们一致同意制作视频记录我们在学校的经历.
1)having had 现在分词完成式做时间状语,相当于after引导的时间状语从句;分词做状语是书面表达的亮点句型.
2)agree on 取得一致意见.
句型二:
Material collecting took us a whole week,during which (1)we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life(2).收集材料花费了我们整整一个星期;在此期间我们采访了老师,拍摄了我们学校生活的每一方面.
1)during which 在此期间,which引导的非限制性定语从句,which指代上文的a whole week,非限制性定语从句是书面表达中常用的高分句型.
2)every aspect of school life学校生活的每一方面
句型三:
We debated over (1)what to put into(2)the video.我们就把什么材料放进视频进行辩论.
1)debate over 就…进行辩论.
2)what to put into the video为"疑问词+to do"相当于一个名词性从句,本句中相当于一个宾语从句;书面表达中运用"疑问词+to do"会使得表达简练.