Question

【题目】假如你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你了解到你校国际部学生对“全国戏曲进校园”活动（national opera on campus）很感兴趣，且学校决定承办一次戏剧演出。请你用英文给国际部的学生写封邮件告知此事。邮件内容包括：

1．说明事由；

2．演出信息（时间、地点等）；

3．欢迎参加。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Hello, everybody!

I am president of the Student Union in our school_____ ____________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everybody!

I am president of the Student Union in our school. I’ve heard that most students in our International Department are interested in the “national opera on campus”. To satisfy your thirst, we plan to organize an opera show in our school.

As scheduled, the show will be held in our school hall next Friday. It is expected to start at 2:30 pm and last about 2 hours. Also, the show is supposed to offer you a variety of performances related to opera, including singing, dialogues, movements as well as facial make-up, which surely won’t make you disappointed. So it’s really something you can’t miss.

Whoever is interested in it is welcome to be present on time.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，要符合信件的格式要求。从结构而言，首先要说明是由，就是写信的目的；其次，要把此次演出的各种信息全部写得清清楚楚，是文章的正文部分；最后一定要用客气的语气诚挚地邀请。本文时态适合用现在时以及将来时。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。宾语从句的使用：I’ve heard that most students in our International Department are interested in the “national opera on campus”.非限制性定语从句的使用：……，which surely won’t make you disappointed.主语从句的使用：Whoever is interested in it is welcome to be present on time.