Question

【题目】假定你是高中生李华。你班同学决定举行班级春游。请你写一封邮件邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：

1. 时间：4月22日早8点北门出发；下午5点磨山樱园入口处集合返校；

2. 地点：东湖绿道；

3. 内容安排：绿道骑行；户外野餐（食物自备）；小组自由活动。

注意：

1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：东湖绿道 The East Lake Greenway

Hi Susan,

We’re planning a spring outing for the whole class.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Susan,

We’re planning an spring outing for the whole class. We’d like to invite you to join us in this activity.

Regarded as the most beautiful greenway with its breath-taking scenery, the East Lake Greenway has become a hot tourist attraction of Wuhan. Therefore, we decide to organize the spring outing there.

We’ll gather at the school North Gate at 8 am on April 22nd. After our arrival at the Greenway, the whole class will be divided into several groups. Riding bikes along the way, taking photos and having an outdoor picnic are what on our schedule. You can join whichever groups to experience fun and excitement. Oh, one more thing, don’t forget to show up at 5 pm, when we gather to go back to school together at the entrance of the Cherry Blossom Garden.

It will be nice to have a good time with you in the spring outing. Expecting your reply and your coming as well.

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封电子邮件。你班同学决定举行班级春游。请你写一封邮件邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：时间：4月22日早8点北门出发；下午5点磨山樱园入口处集合返校；地点：东湖绿道；内容安排：绿道骑行；户外野餐（食物自备）；小组自由活动。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封电子邮件，格式正确，内容齐全，要点突出，语句过渡自然，句子衔接紧密，高级词汇和句子用在句中。Regarded as the most beautiful greenway with its breath-taking scenery, the East Lake Greenway has become a hot tourist attraction of Wuhan.过去分词做原因状语；Riding bikes along the way, taking photos and having an outdoor picnic are what on our schedule.句中动名词做主语，且what引导表语从句；You can join whichever groups to experience fun and excitement. 句中whichever 引导表语从句；Oh, one more thing, don’t forget to show up at 5 pm, when we gather to go back to school together at the entrance of the Cherry Blossom Garden.句中when引导定语从句；另外，Therefore, divided into，have a good time等的运用使文章丰富多彩。