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8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
 
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to become one of the host family of the British students.
We have a large and clean house,where lies in the center of the city.I can speak English fluent and my parents are both English teachers.Therefore,we won't have any difficulty communicate with English speakers.My father is an excellent driver but we can show foreign students around some places of interest in our own car.Last month we received two American students.We had a great fun together.Besides,my mother cooked well,so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food.I would greatly appreciate if I could have the opportunity to make friends with you.
I'm looking forward to hearing about you.
                                                                    Yours,
                                                                     Li Hua.

分析 这是李华写的一封信,目的是想让他们家能够有机会成为英国学生的寄宿家庭之一;在信中,李华主要介绍了自己以及父母的英语水平及其它优势.

解答 Dear Sir,
I'm writing to become one of the hostfamilyof the British students.
We have a large and clean house,where lies in the center of the city.
I can speak Englishfluentand my parents are both English teachers.
Therefore,we won't have any difficulty communicatewith English speakers.
My father is an excellent driverbutwe can show foreign students around some
places of interest in our own car.Last month we received two American students.
We had a great fun together.Besides,my mother cooked well,so the students
will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food.I would greatly appreciate∧if I could
have the opportunity to make friends with you.
I'm looking forward to hearingaboutyou.
                                                                    Yours,
                                                                     Li Hua.

详解:
1.family改为families    考查名词的单复数    此处指的是许多寄宿家庭(之一),由于family是可数名词,故用复数名词families.
2.where改为which    考查关系代词     本句为非限定性的定语从句,由于先行词 house在该从句中作主语,故用关系代词which.
3.fluent改为fluently    考查副词    此处用来修饰动词speak,故用副词fluently.
4.communicate改为communicating    考查固定搭配     have any/some difficulty (in) doing sth.意为:做某事有困难;故用communicating.
5.but改为and/so   考查句意关系以及连词    本句的意思是:我的父亲是一名优秀的司机,(那么/因此)我们可以用我们自己的车带着外国学生参观一些名胜古迹;此处表示顺承/因果关系,故用and/so. 
6.cooked改为cooks    考查时态   此处介绍的是李华的母亲现在的情况,应使用一般现在时;故用cooks.
7.去掉a    考查不可数名词    由于fun是不可数名词,所以它的前面不能加不定冠词,故去掉great之前的a.
8.appreciate后加it    考查固定表达   I would greatly appreciate it if意为:如果…我将不胜感激;故在appreciate后加it.  
9.you改为them    考查人称代词的一致性    此处在句中作宾语,指代的是来中国家庭寄宿的英国学生们,故用them.
10.about改为from    考查固定搭配   hear from意为:收到某人的来信;故用from.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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