题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,准备与新西兰的朋友Rosy去参观中国园林博物馆。现收到该馆暂时闭馆通知,请写一封信告知她,内容包括:
1. 表示遗憾;
2. 推迟原因;
3. 新的安排。
提示:中国园林博物馆:the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Rosy,
How are things going with you? I'm pretty sorry to say that there is a new notification that the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture will close until further notice. It is a pity that we won't be able to visit it as planned.
The reason for the museum's temporary closing is that it needs to be updated, which means we will have the opportunity to witness a new face of it in the near future. In spite of this, we can still make some other plans. For example, the Summer Palace is a good alternative, which is sure to leave an equally deep impression on us.
What do you suggest we should do together? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给新西兰的朋友Rosy,通知她中国园林博物馆暂时闭馆,及其它相关事宜。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 表示遗憾;
2. 推迟原因;
3. 新的安排。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture;temporary closing;need to be done;in spite of;leave a deep impression on sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm pretty sorry to say that there is a new notification that the Museum of Chinese Gardens and Landscape Architecture will close until further notice.
2. The reason for the museum's temporary closing is that it needs to be updated,
3. In spite of this, we can still make some other plans.
4. which is sure to leave an equally deep impression on us.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改