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【题目】DirectionsWrite an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

近期的一项网络调查发现,近七成受访者表示他们不愿对父母开放微信朋友圈;屏蔽父母的主要理由是,认为父母过度关心、管教太多、无法沟通。谈谈你对屏蔽父母这种做法的看法。你是否对父母开放你的朋友圈呢?请说明理由

屏蔽父母:don’t share my moments with my parents

微信朋友圈:WeChat Moments

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【答案】Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform. But do you think parents should be allowed to see their children’s Moments?

According to the newly-conducted survey, about 70% of the participants don’t share the moments with their parents. First and foremost, they think their parents pay too much attention to their privacy, and set a lot of rules for them to obey. Moreover, the generation gap is always a big problem, which will cause a lot of misunderstandings to arise if parents are enabled to see the posts.

Anyway, I think otherwise. In my opinion, I believe sharing my moments with my parents will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication. Besides, adolescents are easily misled by the complicated society. If they give their parents a place in the online world, they can be protected.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生针对热点话题“是否对父母屏蔽朋友圈”发表评论。

第一步:审题

体裁:议论文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:1.提出论题:是否应该对父母开放朋友圈(share my moments with my parents

2.分论点一:反对观点及其支持句(dont share the moments with their parentsprivacygeneration gap

3.分论点二:个人观点及其支持句 (share the moments with my parents; strengthen mutual communication; be protected)

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

social network platform; pay attention to; set rules; the generation gap; promote understanding; strengthen mutual communication

第三步:连词成句

1. Nowadays, it seems that Moments section of WeChat has become a popular part of social network platform.

2. First and foremost, they think their parents pay too much attention to their privacy, and set a lot of rules for them to obey.

3. The generation gap is always a big problem.

4. I believe sharing my moments with my parents will promote understanding and strengthen mutual communication.

根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

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