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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nowadays many young parents are addicted in their electric devices like smartphones or computers, pay less or no attention to their kids.

Then what does it come about? Admittedly, the smartphone indeed dramatically changes our life. With it, people can do nearly everything we want, such as surfing the Internet for information, watching films or video, doing some online shopping and playing games as well as. Thus, a smartphone serves as a platform for them to get fun in a comfortable and convenience way. As a result more and more young parents are being attracted.

However, nothing can replace face-to-face communication between parents and kids, what requires parents to think about the real meaning of life, spends more time with their children and have fun together. Only in this way a better parent-child relationship be developed.

【答案】1. in → to/into

2. pay → paying

3. what → how

4. we → they

5. video → videos

6. 删除well后的as

7. convenience → convenient

8. what → which

9. spends → spend

10. a前加can/will

【解析】

这是一篇说明文。本文讲述为什么许多年轻父母沉迷于智能手机或电脑等电子设备,很少或根本不关心孩子。并且给了一些建议来建立良好的亲子关系。

1. 考查介词。此处考查固定短语be addicted to/into“对……上瘾”,故将in改为to/into。

2. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知,此处应用非谓语动词作状语,逻辑主语young parents和pay之间是主动关系,应用现在分词,故将pay改为paying。

3. 考查特殊疑问词。句意:那么它是如何产生的呢?根据句意和句子成分可知,此处用特殊疑问词how“如何”符合语境,故将what改为how。

4. 考查代词。句意:有了它,人们就可以做他们想做的所有事情,例如上网查信息,看电影或视频,网上购物,也可以打游戏。根据句意可知,此处用they“他们”符合语境,照应上文提到的people,故将we改为they。

5. 考查名词的数。video“视频”是可数名词,根据films判断此处应用其复数形式,指代一类事物,故将video改为videos。

6. 考查固定短语。句意:有了它,人们就可以做他们想做的所有事情,例如上网查信息,看电影或视频,网上购物也可以打游戏。根据句意可知,此处考查固定短语as well“也”,故删除well后的as。

7. 考查形容词。分析句子可知,此处应用形容词修饰名词way,故将convenience改为convenient。

8. 考查定语从句。分析句子可知,此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词是前面的整个句子,关系词代替它在从句种充当主语,应用关系代词which,故将what改为which。

9. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知,句中同时用think,spend和have fun的不定式形式作为parents的补语,为避免重复,后两个不定式省略不定式符号to,故将spends改为spend。

10. 考查部分倒装。句意:只有通过这种方式,一个更好的亲子关系才会被建立。分析句子可知,此处把only in this way放在句首,应该部分倒装,将情态动词/助动词/be动词置于主语a better parent-child relationship之前,再由下文的be判断此处应用情态动词,根据句意可知,此处用情态动词can/will符合语境,故在a前加can/will。

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