Question

每到双休时，有些同学不是充分地利用它来好好的调整自己，而是把时间用在上网或看电视上。很多家长对这种情况 担忧。请你对此现象写一片短文，谈谈我们中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末。
词数：120左右。

Answer 1

Nowadays we students don’t have to learn at school at weekends. However, some students don’t know how to spend their weekends. They are seen sleeping late, surfing the Internet or watching TV as they like. What they do has caused their parents to be worried.
In my opinion, weekend is a good time for us to have a good rest. But as students, we may as well set aside some time to review what we have learned in school. I would like to arrange time like this: in the mornings, we should do our homework; in the afternoons, we can have sports or help with some housework, or even go shopping with our parents; in the evenings, we can watch TV or surf the Internet for a while.
In this way, we can lay a solid foundation for our future development and enjoy ourselves.

这是一篇开放性作文，并且给出一个话题，并且有部分的文字提示。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，并且句式要赋予变化，同时也在选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织尪个完整的整体。注意时态用一般现在时较好，注意前后人称保持一致，突出亮点，用好用对句型。
【亮点说明】 范文中出现一些高级短语，in one’s opinion 在某人看来 have a rest 休息，help with 在某方面帮助某人，go shopping 购物。What they do has caused their parents to be worried，用了what 引导主语从句，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。we may as well set aside some time to review what we have learned in school，may as well do sth 最好做某事，to do 做目的状语。I would like to arrange time like this: in the mornings, we should do our homework; in the afternoons, we can have sports or help with some housework, or even go shopping with our parents; in the evenings, we can watch TV or surf the Internet for a while，用到了排比句，使文章很有条理。